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PEOPLE

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PEOPLE

Walking, sitting, talking everywhere
People standing, please don't stare
Running, Jogging around the park
Please don't go there after dark.

Screaming, yelling, children shout
Mothers queuing at the checkout
Singing, dancing, laughing, crying
Babies born people dying.

Daylight now is growing dim
Chance of  a visitor now slim
Settling in the old armchair
I'm sure I should be  elsewhere.

Talking on the mobile phone
Sat at home all alone
Locking up for the night
Waiting for tomorrows daylight.


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  1. Date: 10/3/2012 8:54:00 AM

    I like it, but you need to edit here and there as some word are not separated, like these, Peoplestanding

    Connelly Avatar Hazel Connelly Date: 10/3/2012 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    already did it as you was posting.
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 8:54:00 AM

    reminds me of my poem i wrote a few years back called perpetual verse cool rhyme pattern xx davidscott

    Connelly Avatar Hazel Connelly Date: 10/3/2012 2:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Is it on here David?