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Almost Guilty

Occasionally I cry,
Overwhelming joy, 
Sadness is deprived
Seems Surreal
I found the real deal,
I feel almost guilty
Like it's a steal
Must have been a saint in a past life,
I'll soon be lucky enough to be his wife



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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 7:27:00 AM

    lovely write of love Sharon,wedding invitation wife to be lol

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 10/6/2012 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for reading my stuff:))
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 5:28:00 PM

    Your form is Rhyme since most of your lines end in a word which rhymes with a line above surreal/deal/steal & life/wife. You could also [when in doubt use the form category Verse. Welcome to Soup Light & Love

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 10/3/2012 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you:)
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 2:21:00 PM

    Seems you need a lawyer to seal the deal. Put it all in writing and spin the blissful wheel. Let emotions have their way. And gratitude begin the day.

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 10/3/2012 4:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading!