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Slamming Doors


The sound of anger is a silent one,
Don’t you know?
A deaf tone ringing, Vibrating then nothing 
An alliteration of explosive hollow emotions
 Replete with intoxicating truths

Words exchanged broke these smiles 
But are meaningless before doors slam 
Slamee or slammer does it matter?
For after these doors slam
We say what we mean


Ronny Madonsela 22/09/2012

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:40:00 PM

    provoactive and blasting work, ronny.. silent waters run deep!.. wowie! :) huggs

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:20:00 PM

    deep with emotion Ronny, a well written poem,, really holds the reader...

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 8:38:00 PM

    An insightful write here Ronny.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 4:49:00 PM

    How true..I think you say what you mean when you are angry, unfortunately..great imagery..Thanks for commenting on my poems....Holly Moore

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 1:44:00 PM

    power-pack verse, pace... i was there from dtart to finish; wow!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 8:12:00 AM

    very interesting the way you portrayed human emotion and fighting in this poem, Ronny. I liked this one.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 5:10:00 PM

    Yep! Anger can be soooo silent, at which point it may be worse that the noise. Great write Ron. Thanks for visiting and love your hearty comment. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 7:14:00 PM

    oh this is so true...made me think of times i heard doors slamming, and no words were needed....great write!

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Ah, how painful silence can be and yes, anger can be so silent and say so much, it can tear the soul--- I really like this, Ronny...I have been trying to write a poem on silence as well, hopefully I can finish it soon-- you have managed to wrap up silence with a few lines...thank you btw for passing by my poem, glad you like it...

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:18:00 PM

    Thisshows that we don't handle ange it handles us. A lot of emotion in this one Ronny; can't wait to make up! :)

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:33:00 AM

    Slamming doors is symbolical, I know of muggers slamming doors, police too does that, angry husband or wife, young people also, representing vexed spirit of different kind of people....... Doors are being slammed when those wonderful smiles go away. Nice poem.....

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 3:07:00 PM

    Well written Ronny... very intense! Hugs, Jack XOX

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 2:13:00 PM

    Powerful poem Ronny - Have a lovely weekend. - xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 9:26:00 AM

    ronny, been a while.. so glad i clicked on this page... that ending is great, with the honest portrayal of a tiff blocking love's view... really great stuff...:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:32:00 AM

    Well scripted truth! I can see it Ronny. This has the "it" factor!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 6:52:00 AM

    Oh really enjoyed reading this Rommy, it speaks volumes - Shaz