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When love finds you

~*~ I lay my head upon your chest. Feeling it rise and fall as you breathe. Hearing each beat of your heart. Little pants still escaping through your lips. Putting me at ease, slowly I close my eyes. My body still tingling, aglow from the warmth you give me. I wrap my arm across your stomach. Gliding my hand gently along the length of your side. Counting each rib knowing what they protect. Your precious heart, so full of love. Smiling just a little, because you know it's true There's nothing you can say, when love finds you... <3

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  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:04:00 AM

    not one word,it just consumes you,great write Indigo

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:59:00 PM

    I love "aglow from the warmth", its a wonderful line. The end rhyme at the end is also done very well. Denver

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:53:00 PM

    This is an utterly beautiful write my friend! I truly love this delightful and wonderful poem! You have put my heart in arrhythmia with this perfect write! Oh wow, this write is so very remarkable with its tenderness and heartfelt words! What a superior piece Tracie, Great Work!!