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A Diamond In Your Eye

Dear Sir, I saw you watching me from where you sat at your own table, just like me. I’m sure you saw me trying not to stare right back at you! I’ll tell you, honestly I’ve never seen a guy like you before, with eyes of such a brilliant and rare hue. I could not just stay seated any more. I felt compelled to come and talk to you. So now I’m here. Ah, yes! Your eyes are green. I thought they were. . . and yet they far outshine mere emeralds! I think that I have been enraptured since your gaze first fell on mine! I tell you this (though, truly, I am shy) I want to be a diamond in your eye! Inspired by Gail Doyle's A Diamond In Your Eyes Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:14:00 PM

    Wonderful and unique write Andrea......congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Hey congrats on this win!!!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:19:00 PM

    Nice poem Andrea - congrats to you! - Shaz

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:45:00 PM

    CONGRATS ANDREA ON A GREAT AND GLORIOUS WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:37:00 PM

    ANDREA, congratulations, with your awesome poem in Gail's contest..... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 4:15:00 PM

    Congrats on your victory!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 3:10:00 PM

    congrats on your win Andrea...lovely sonnet....

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 2:41:00 PM

    My sonneteer wins again Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:43:00 AM

    Congratulations friend Andrea on your win on Gail's contest...cheers!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:47:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Diamond" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:20:00 AM

    ...Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:35:00 AM

    MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND, ANDREA. HUGS:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:07:00 PM

    lol, had a chuckle imagining this happening : )

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 11:41:00 PM

    a very creative poem friend Andrea...i like it...Good luck in the contest. hugs!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:44:00 PM

    A sparkling write here Andrea, you really made this one come alive with the rich descriptions.. "

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 4:55:00 PM

    A reflecting gem of a write Andrea.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 5:58:00 PM

    This is beautiful. I want to be a diamond in your eye. I like that. Good luck in the contest. Lucy

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 5:02:00 PM

    always perfect and interesting Andrea .. like a melodious song it sings winner .. good luck my friend ..

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:36:00 PM

    Hi Andreayou are certainly a diamond on the soup, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 2:58:00 PM

    You my gal are really getting into the modern sonnet swing! [All hail the sonneteer!] Thanks for the fav ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 2:33:00 PM

    The more i click, on things here on the soup.I do not like them. I like it when our soup-mail, was easy to click on too... love this poem for the second time... Andrea,... and that poem is for SCRIBES, contest... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 12:14:00 PM

    Great work that you have written..I wrote one similar about seeing a man in a fast food restaurant but it wasn't green eyes that got my attention..Good luck in the contest..A winner in my book..Thanks for stopping by my blog..The doctor gave me a non-discript what my problem could be..It is something about getting older that causes some people to get a problem with dizziness..My blood pressure was 210/110..That was a big problem and the antivert causes it to go higher..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 10:45:00 AM

    Lol,no worries..am shy too!:-) I love this very sweet poem,Andrea.Great entry for Gail`s contest.Have a wonderful Wednesday:) Love,Arild

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 8:06:00 AM

    I found it Andrea! Thank you so much. I'll check the soupmail. tom. Good night! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:40:00 AM

    Hi, Andrea! I'm stopping by here again because I noticed some changes on PS. I think you send me message on soupmail today but I can't open it. Another thing is i can't find post a poem anymore. Do you notice the same thing? me, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 5:31:00 AM

    Excellent sonnet Andrea!! you've mastered sonnets and now you improvise too! Just wow!! this is a top entry, Loooved it!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 12:24:00 AM

    Hi, Andrea! HOw are you? I hope you're fine. This is another lovely poem of yours which I've enjoyed reading. An awesome piece indeed!! Wish you all the luck and best wishes in your big win. Have a nice and gracefilled day always!! love/hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:35:00 PM

    well-penned words. I've enjoyed reading - JH

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:09:00 PM

    Andrea, hi how are you doing?? this is a nice little entry... good luck, with your entry... i like the diamond you appear, in others... .. enjoyed stopping by~ ALWAYS~ PD

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 7:41:00 PM

    a diamond of a sonnet..aha, noone can resist you my dear Beautiful eye, one look from you and anyone is going to fall like nine pins..I loved this sonnet Andrea..you write an awesome sonnet ..leaving me quite speechless with wonder...how are you dear darling best friend of mine..am busy as a harassed bee...hahahahha...but good to read you, relaxes and makes me happy..

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