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A Diamond In Your Eye

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A Diamond In Your Eye

Dear Sir, I saw you watching me from where you sat at your own table, just like me. I’m sure you saw me trying not to stare right back at you! I’ll tell you, honestly I’ve never seen a guy like you before, with eyes of such a brilliant and rare hue. I could not just stay seated any more. I felt compelled to come and talk to you. So now I’m here. Ah, yes! Your eyes are green. I thought they were. . . and yet they far outshine mere emeralds! I think that I have been enraptured since your gaze first fell on mine! I tell you this (though, truly, I am shy) I want to be a diamond in your eye! Inspired by Gail Doyle's A Diamond In Your Eyes Poetry Contest and now for PD's Any Poem Goes #17Contest

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  1. Date: 4/17/2014 2:16:00 AM
    Great poetry n great win Andrea ! Congrats!

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 7:11:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 10:59:00 AM
    I love that last line Andrea...congrats on the win

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 10:04:00 AM
    What a wonderful sonnet Andrea. I am sure you still are a diamond in his eye...hugs Tim

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 9:44:00 AM
    Happy to see you on the winner's list. Congrats, andrea

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 2:14:00 AM
    ANDREA, THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST... XOX...LINDA

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 2:14:00 AM
    (((This is a copy paste note to every poet, PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE A REPLY ON THIS COMMENT. I'm not being rude, 95% of the time, I never come back to read the reply you left on my comment. If for some reason, you want to give thanks. Let's do it the old fashion way. Drop by and read one of my poems, or send the thanks through soup mail, or just enjoy my visit. As I would yours. I don't enjoy comments on comment's. It takes away from every poet, One day Poetry Soup Will See it.... Have yourself a lovely day.)))

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:14:00 PM
    Wonderful and unique write Andrea......congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 9:37:00 AM
    Hey congrats on this win!!!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:19:00 PM
    Nice poem Andrea - congrats to you! - Shaz

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:45:00 PM
    CONGRATS ANDREA ON A GREAT AND GLORIOUS WIN LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:37:00 PM
    ANDREA, congratulations, with your awesome poem in Gail's contest..... xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 4:15:00 PM
    Congrats on your victory!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 3:10:00 PM
    congrats on your win Andrea...lovely sonnet....

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 2:41:00 PM
    My sonneteer wins again Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:43:00 AM
    Congratulations friend Andrea on your win on Gail's contest...cheers!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Diamond" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 9:20:00 AM
    ...Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:35:00 AM
    MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND, ANDREA. HUGS:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:07:00 PM
    lol, had a chuckle imagining this happening : )

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