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Gallivanting As The Unicorn's Guest -

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Gallivanting As The Unicorn's Guest -

Galloping within the nights of her innocence
he raced around the field fire chasing the heat of equine glee,
the horn of his head, a wizard's weapon and a witch's wish
with which a poison may be whimpered and youth enriched with longer laugh,
rose gold gilding on the supernatural spike  ribboned with ribs of silver spells,

sensing the magic of her intuitive love the beast of God's bridge halts,
her eyes pretty in patient approach, his alert with admiring admonition,
they tresspass upon each other by exhalation of warm airy awe
whirling from their mouths, measuring the elation of frienship newly carved,
although invited to mount, the Maiden rubs her chin along his velvet nose,
fingers glide through the mane like breeze through willow branches, he huffs from joy,
in a gesture of supplication she kneels to the Unicorn's lead leg, one arm around
and a hand of healing pressed against his ripened chest, be restless and alone no more,
nibbling her ear in acceptence she giggles at the thought of adventure's anxiety,

leaping like an angel possessed with purpose for playful liaisons,
his back forming a saddle of supple security for her healthy frame, they join naturally,
she names him Azyerbel and he rears in rejoice at the grip of her knees,
riding into hinterlands of history unborn, they share courage known only to legends - 

J.A.B.  written in honor of, and for PD.'s Unicorn Birthday Contest 2012 -
Happy Birthday my Sphinx -

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  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:12:00 PM

    Ah, a "playful" entry for the Unicorn's Birthday Contest, Justin! Fun things happening here.:) Party hats for the reader handed out with all the wonderful imagery. A gallant Unicorn you've depicted, Justin. PD does have the lovely face of a woman, and the heart of a lion!Have enjoyed this read. Love, Mikki

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/10/2012 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thats what makes her my Sphinx Mikki - I had to make the Unicorn match the talent of PD., they compliment each other, and it is an adventersome partnership indeed - good to have your love today - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:48:00 AM

    Spectacular poem! Don't know why I hadn' read it earlier. I'm not the best at expressing myself when commenting on poetry, but I must say this poem as wonderful. Will be keepin tabs on your work. ;) Heehee Take care and keep up the spectacularlyamazingtasticalness :D Always, Laura

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/6/2012 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your love is delicious Laura - I can't thank you enough for your continuous attention, it truly is a gift that I take seriously - as I have told you before, your work is superb, your metaphors and themes are amongst the very best! Your admiring colleague, J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:20:00 AM

    Many congrats Justin for this wonderful win.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/6/2012 11:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I thank you for your time and respect Tahera - Looking forward to familiarizing myself with your work - I like your name - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 10:16:00 PM

    Hi Justin, congrats once again~ stopping by to say good night before I head out... sweet dreams.. always~ PD

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/5/2012 10:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My dreams will surely be merrier knowing I succeeded in making you happy PD. - I thank you for the opportunity to make a Goddess smile - Happy Birthday my Sister Of The Quill - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Justin. Love, Carol

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/5/2012 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Carol - I had much fun & exhileration with the challenge of honoring PD. with a composition suitable for her unparalled qualities - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 11:15:00 AM

    Big Congratulations for winning PD's "Unicorns" you are a great poet/writer indeed!! cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (^_^)

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/5/2012 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lovely adventure was my intention Mandy - thanks for your compliment, I appreciate it much - J.A.B. %
    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/5/2012 10:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your respect and friendliness will not be forgotten Maria - writing with the anticipation of artists like you appreciating the effort is an invaluable motivation - I admire the innocence of your energetic poetry Maria - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 10:28:00 AM

    Congratulations this is another lovely write for PD xx

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/5/2012 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops! I 'got ahead of myself' Mandy - Appreciation from up above ^^^^^^^^^^ -
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 9:01:00 AM

    Congrats on this lovely poem dedicated to the birthday girl PD. Well done. Lee

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/5/2012 10:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lee - Its a privilege receiving recognition for writing a work for such a special poetess - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 7:33:00 AM

    Justin, come back to this one, this poem made me happy,, This is my favorite image ------> "eaping like an angel possessed with purpose for playful liaisons," I do love the flight...love pd

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/5/2012 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Obviously, you are a Sphinx with the heart of an angel and the honor of a lioness - with love and respect - you raise the standard - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 7:20:00 AM

    Justin. Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/5/2012 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    When one is as good as you PD. its not greed, its sweet reward for all that you do for this Community, truly, for the world - Providence has undoubtedly chosen your heart & talent for communicating to civilization the nature of virtue and victory - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:27:00 PM

    I am sure that PD loved this one..Interesting work..Sara

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/5/2012 10:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sara, you are intriguing - I am glad you visited and found my work stimulating - thanks - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 2:14:00 AM

    Very much an epic, this one..great effort on your part, pd will sure like it! Jag

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/4/2012 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Evidently there is a viciously defended monopoly of knowledge, especially regarding the natural sciences and human origins - African Americans know all to well the devastation of being denied knowledge about their places of origin - "information/knowledge is power " as they say - J.A.B. %
    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/4/2012 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I did my best for her Jag - thanks much for the respect - Central Asia/India are truly craddles of post-delluvian civilization, at least in the Eastern hemisphere; Egypt & Sumeria overshadow India's great preservations & contribution to wisdom teachings somewhat because of a bias by so called academic scholars who have multifaceted agendas, and I believe there is a concerted effort by 'academia' to conceal truth about human history -
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 2:54:00 PM

    wow, PD is getting quite the splendid collection of unicorn tales such as this one that you have written! I just did a mere two quatrains!! She will love this.

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/4/2012 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Its too bad we can't wrap them for her Andrea - I'll be happy to honor you too when the time is right - your Unicorn write is sensational! J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:33:00 AM

    Wow! An awesome epic you've penned, Justine! I'm sure our dearest friend PD will love it. Thank you so much for sharing and for your precious time reading mine. Good luck and best wishes always! hugs:) Leonora

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/3/2012 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We make each other precious in this community Leonora, your attention is sustenance for me - This theme of PD.'s was a unique challenge for my quill, I'm happy that you believe it to be a success - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 12:15:00 AM

    wonderfully written my friend Justin..I like it..our friend PD love it already. thanks for dropping by. Good day (^_^)

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/3/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Maria - I wanted to balance fantasy with a sense of simple, realistic sentiment & tangibility - Glad you like it too - J.A.B. %
  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:03:00 PM

    Hi Justin, This is a big honor. Can't wait to read it with all my other entries.. Right now, I'm having an early peek...LOL.. could not resist, when I clicked on your name. Thank you very much.. hugs and love.. and smiles, always~ PD

    Bordner Avatar Justin Bordner Date: 10/2/2012 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Eliciting a merry response from you is all I wanted PD. - I thank you for being a strong source of inspiration - your creative intellect and love are gifts that last - J.A.B. %