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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 10:21:00 AM
    Good morning Scribe, when you have time read my latest, posted it this morning... LOL, it'a an out of the box kind of poem... Tell me what you really think, when you have time of course...xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 9:29:00 PM
    I think you missed my last drama blog in which the soup removed 6 or seven days ago... then they placed a blog about drama... that is the cause... and you know me.. I do not react until I'm pushed... and LOL...i was pushed... but, after that..I will be back with poems and all...xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:09:00 PM
    Nice, very nice Scribe ;} You have a blessed Christmas Holiday ;}

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:44:00 AM
    Whoa. This is a heavily philosophical poem. So many thoughts to ponder on. This is you at your finest. Very crafty....actually, I found the end to be very tricky. Wot does the end-line mean? When you have time, drop me a line about it ok? I am quite intrigued.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 4:54:00 PM
    Scribe nice one, no the best. I like this one. It seems you are the brilliant one.

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 9:34:00 PM
    Scribe, thank you very much for the birthday wish,, it was supper nice of you,, and now you have to tell me when's your birthday... I want to add you to my soup birthday list.. I hope you do not mind me asking.... always~ PD

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:02:00 PM
    This is a new direction for you, metaphysics and mystical. Does this world offer redemption?

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 3:03:00 PM
    Mr Poet Linton,wow this is thought provoking indeed!! A powerful masterpiece!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:42:00 PM
    Hey Marlon, I love that new picture! It's good to see you smiling! Have fun choosing a poem, may have to close your eyes and point at the screen, and let that be the one. That's the advice I gave to Ruben who was having a hard time choosing one. ha Ha! love and hugs to you and yours, Catie :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 12:53:00 PM
    wonderful write Scribe,loved it

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:39:00 AM
    Nice conflict delineated within the metaphysics of this composition Scribe - Bravo! The third verse is a spectacular tapestry of contrasts in color, in soul - I greatly respect the originality of these masterful metaphors - Makes me think about our power /potential to dismiss the forcast and predictions of others when they are in contradistinction, or countravening to our own objectives and sense of purpose - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:04:00 AM
    Wow this is thought provoking Im wit it

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 11:19:00 AM
    There is much we will never be able to understand - very well written - bravo!! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 9:26:00 AM
    Okay, Marlon, here is that contest you owe me! Ha! Ha! I know your entry will be excellent and I am looking forward to read what you come up with. hugs, your friend, Catie :)

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 6:27:00 PM
    really really liked, great use of alliteration, metaphor, yet the ending stepped me off a cliff..which prophet..what purpose?? Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 1:53:00 PM
    passing through to re-read your bold piece,marlon..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 9:00:00 AM
    the equilibrium of life, Scribe, brilliant content, really makes one think does this wonderful poem!!!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:30:00 PM
    PS. you do not have to answer my questions below.. I just found it Ironic, how you mentioned a subject me and my fiance were discussing. Your poem is very interesting.. I'll be back later on tonight.. take care,,, xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:28:00 PM
    Hello, Scribe, I wonder the purpose of us all. I am in such an orthodox moment.. LOL. this is the second poem I've read with the same topics me and my Fiance were talking about. And the main person we talked about was Cain" Scribe, if you know the story, can you please tell me, what happen to Cain, after he murdered Able. Was he exiled, ..what kind of life did he inherit. I could not find anything on him, after reading about Cain & Able. I checked Genesis 6 to 8..maybe I missed something.

    Grisetti Avatar Joann Grisetti
    Date: 10/8/2012 8:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    heck Genesis Chapter 4 Cain went to live in Nod.. His son Enoch was the first, and probably only to walk with God and live.
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 6:45:00 AM
    powerful write , very moving. lol I think i have a new fav poem of yours now. that you for blessing us with this creative write.