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WONDER OF DUSK

Hands interlocked;day goes dark,
the night spreads its sheet,
Ripples on stream as fries play,
Joy flows like a fleet,
Moon shines with a dim light,
As fire flies lit up jasmine,
Blushing with delight.


Olusegun Arowolo   Date:10-01-2012



Contest:"Wonder of Dusk in Seguidilla" sponsored by Nette Onclaud.

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  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:23:00 PM

    Beautiful verse Olusegun!Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:15:00 AM

    Congrats on your victory poet!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:06:00 AM

    I would have placed this higher..its very nice! congrats. BG

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 5:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 2:53:00 AM

    Wow! This is LOVEly! Nicely done Arowolo!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:09:00 PM

    Splendid images you have drawn with your words.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:06:00 PM

    Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am reading what looks to be some exceptional writing today. So glad I was able to read yours Olusegun. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol