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BECOMING FRIENDS

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BECOMING FRIENDS


When I think of you, a night sky, Etching bold scribbles in July That trickle and rap on my window A bluish-white Craig of sea, That beckoned my eyes to feel the dew And in your river's wide flow, New friendship ambles and rides a halo. Searching the essence in moon’s follies Amidst a current of reasons, You become a fluid stallion. When I think of you, I recall First coming to the Soup last fall And befriending your every turn An inspiration from a walk to a waltz, Then dance and soar, and sing As you flew on iridescent wings. Then, with a brush of gypsy- Nette’s pen; Landing on the highest branch, Against the dark of a night sky You become a sapphire butterfly. For Tracie Edwards' When I Think of You Contest Collab of nette onclaud and Craig Cornish

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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 3:50:00 PM
    Hi Nette,, congratulations in Traice's sweet 's "When I think of you.. I (collab)" contest.. :-) always~pd

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 6:26:00 AM
    Congratulations, Nette, on your win in Tracie's contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:08:00 AM
    wow, such beautiful poetry you make together. Congrats you two.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 12:32:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "Collab" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:24:00 AM
    beautiful job on this fine win congrats cory

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 10:39:00 AM
    Written perfectly for each other..like a caress. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:48:00 AM
    Nette, Soooo much fun--apparently confusing too many, but whatever, yo babe!!! Luv ya and you're an awesome partner here!!!! Honored to colab with a talent such as yours.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 9:23:00 AM
    WARM CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A SPLENDID TOP NOTCH WRITE AND WIN WITH CRAIG .. LOVELY SENTIMENTS ON BECOMING FRIENDS .. ENJOY LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:08:00 AM
    Wow! This is wonderfully written Nette! You've done very well in your depiction of friendship. Nice!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:10:00 AM
    Such lovely words and wonderful collab dedication to Craig. Well done Nette! and good luck.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 6:40:00 AM
    Just simply wow!:) Best wishes for the contest. I'm going to see what Craig wrote. Love, from...Hanitra...hahaha!:)... My name!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 3:35:00 PM
    Nette, SOOO much fun even from a half a world apart--that 12 hrs is a killer with coordination---but you're easy to work with and a doll! I like the mystery man tag--perhaps tights, a cape and a big red M--NAAA maybe 20 years ago!! Luv Ya! PS Just ran in and checked the mirror.....and I do indeed exist phew!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 12:11:00 PM
    Ah, a mystery man. Is he real, nette, or one of your superb fantasies? Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:08:00 PM
    I was lost and found now......

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:07:00 PM
    Wow!!Excellent one Nette!Best wishes to both of you.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:07:00 PM
    I like that sapphire butterfly...Enjoyed reading your creative work..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your creative comments are always uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:29:00 PM
    Today is the start of a new month and a new week. I am reading what looks to be some exceptional writing today. So glad I was able to read yours Nette & Craig. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:21:00 PM
    Magic from the wits of two wordsmith's. The magnitude of these images; a fluid stallion, and a sapphire butterfly! Beauty!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:40:00 AM
    AWWWWW! Truly awesome! Gratitude should always be expressed this way. Great job!!! :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:34:00 AM
    This is a truly awesome collab my friend! I really enjoyed this creative spice you have so delightfully pieced together Nette! You both came up with very astounding parts of a whole poem! What beauty you have shown within this glorious write, I loved this piece, Great Work!!

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