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A Farewell at Dusk

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A Farewell at Dusk

Pink Sahara in the sky; clouds are dunes of sand. I am watching shadows play right into my hand. Farewell, light of day. Sky, a painted desert rose slowly fades away. Written 9/30/12 by Andrea Dietrich/center>

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  1. Date: 4/9/2014 12:25:00 PM

    ANDREA,, Thank you so much, for the support.... A forever poetry soup joy, when congratulating all contest winners.... Enjoy your day... Forever ~LINDA

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 8:37:00 AM

    Great, colorful, and written to be a winner. I wish you success..... Jake

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:13:00 AM

    Again belated congrats for this beautiful poem with beautiful image. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 10:54:00 PM

    CONGRATS ANDREA ON A SUPER SWEET SUCCESS LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 3:37:00 PM

    Beautiful Andrea, like a painting at dusk!!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 1:44:00 PM

    Congrats on your victory! Beautiful imagery!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:00:00 PM

    Well, to me this is a top winner....this is such a poetic write with those constraints of the form...Goes to my Favs!Congrats!!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:00:00 AM

    My belated big congratulations on your win Andrea. hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:44:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Andrea

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:24:00 AM

    Congratulations friend Andrea for winning on Nette's contest...enjoyed reading today. cheers! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Another beauty..love, love the first line..congrats. BG

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 5:15:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 3:00:00 AM

    congratulations on ur win....xx..:)))

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:21:00 AM

    Wonderful Andie. Your poetry comes alive! Soup mai

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 11:51:00 AM

    Beautiful as I see it all in this painting with words...Ahh! Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:26:00 PM

    Love to watch clouds in the sky and the colors can be so beautiful. You are my last one for tonight. Having thanksgiving dinner tomorrow with all the kids and we are having it at Ryan's house as he has plenty of room. Lovely poem. Nighty night love phyl

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 6:33:00 PM

    Great one..Reads like top of the list to me..I see clouds that look like sand ripples on the shore quite often and do enjoy the beauty of them..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..What about the changes in the Member Area of the site..I no longer have soup mail..I can receive but can't send or I haven't found it yet..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 5:33:00 PM

    Oh! Love this and the way you broke the stanza! Just MINT! See this reaching the top of the list, doll Now, I'm going to try to go back and comment on some of your other poems. If I can do this, then I'll add a comment to your blog! :)xox

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 5:04:00 PM

    impressive piece for Nette .. so intimate in relation to dusk Andrea.. fascinating imagery luv .. best wishes to u ..

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 5:36:00 AM

    love the imagery Andrea, beautiful verse....

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 12:51:00 PM

    This is absolutely marvelous, Andrea. Your colors are vivid and memorable. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Great imagery and love the easy flow.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 4:53:00 AM

    A very warm poem. Hope you do well in the contest. I like the last two lines of the first verse best, Take care, Jancarl

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 2:38:00 AM

    Just lovely Andrea! Love the thought of shadows playing on the hand - it's like being a witness to something exquisite. Nicely done!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 12:58:00 AM

    Amazing write. Well expressed. Tfs

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:50:00 PM

    Oh! Andrea, this is dreamy, and some what romantic,, well, not so much the night fall... anyways, love it..pd

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:10:00 PM

    This is amazingly poetic Andrea.Nette will just love it.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:58:00 PM

    Andrea; I can just picture it in my mind. All colors of nature in the sky. It is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations to you too. Lucy

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:13:00 PM

    that's a beautiful expressed poem,nice rhyme. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you,Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:33:00 AM

    This is quite touching. Thank you for this. Good luck on the contest! :)

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