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GIVE ME

I want to make sure I’m not falling on my face...
And I`m willing to go the distance
And I want to bring back good memories...
I want to make sure
You`re safe and you`re in a safe place

But GIVE ME some space
Sometimes, I wake up...feeling so distressed
But GIVE ME your sweet grace
And we'll beat the race...and this pain we share will not be addressed

I don't want to be unsure - am I the one losing the race?
And I'm chilling in this heavenly place
And I need to trade you my apologies…
I don’t want to waste your time
You’re absolutely safe…as long as you keep pace 

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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 7:28:00 PM

    Sounds to me like you're a winner, Sir! ANyone who can write like this is A-OK!

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:47:00 AM

    Awesome message, and touching expressions. Love it. Always, Laura