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Whiteness

[Couplet]

Light would be an empty sky
No clouds or color for us to spy

Without whiteness nothing would reflect
With the eyes no objects could we detect

Blindness in a world of light
What to do without your sight?




[Rhyme]

The core of all color in this world 
Around it is which all colors curled
It begins with whiteness in the light
That joy of seeing a bird take flight





[Haiku]


The spectrum exists
Because whiteness is in light
Light stops existence?




"Whiteness" contest entries

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  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:39:00 AM

    Hello Tom I am contacting you to let you know I have sent you soup mail, I find I cannot blog at The moment..well for the last few days as a matter Of fact anyway I would be obliged if you could look At your inbox.. God bless you, Joe..)

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 4:42:00 PM

    nicely penned; love the imagery here, tom... enjoyed your perception of this color... winning huggs!

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:33:00 PM

    pleased to read this piece Tom; I feel that you put in a lot of thougjt and effort here.. I wish you well in the contest.." I would place this quite high..!

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 8:43:00 PM

    Lovely! Good entry I say. Cynthia