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Birthday Unicorn

The unicorn was soaring high;
I watched it fly across the sky.
A regal beast of snowy white,
Its horn was like a stalagmite;
Its wingspan took my breath away.
I smiled with joy to hear it neigh -
But then I spotted on its back,
A grinning rider, dressed in black:
PD was out with her new pet;
She waved and zoomed off like a jet.
And as they flew towards the sun,
I knew her birthday would be fun.

Jack Horne, with love to PD on her birthday xxx

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:18:00 AM

    Many congrats Jack for this wonderful win.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:31:00 PM

    Jack, what an awesome verse! A most special gift for PD. A much deserved 1st place win. Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:26:00 PM

    Splendid!nice write,Jack.Congratulations on your superb win...

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 11:03:00 AM

    A very beautiful dedication to our dear friend PD on her very special day…Big Congratulationsfriend Jack!!! Hugs!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 10:33:00 AM

    Holy cow! This is GRRRrrreat! I am so impressed with this poem for her bday!! U captured her playfulness with style!! Wonderful win, Jack!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 10:24:00 AM

    Knew she would just love this one Jack congratulations and well done xx

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:56:00 AM

    So nice, great poem for PD. Congrats on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 8:53:00 AM

    applause to you for your spectacular win, jack.. :) huggs

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 7:19:00 AM

    Jack. Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 7:39:00 AM

    ELOQUENT DESCRIPTION OF A UNICORN AND A PERFECT GIFT FOR pd .. GOOD LUCK TO U JACK MY FRIEND ..LUV

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 11:48:00 PM

    very good poem ,,, P D will like it too ;}

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:28:00 AM

    wow!!!!! so great.... really great..... i love it jack! i am sure, the celebrity, our dear friend PD will love it, too! t Good luck always!! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:03:00 PM

    a zestful storyline with wonderful twists and turns, jack.. winning huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 8:46:00 AM

    Nice Jack boy, well done, can you see you two off on a unicorn...don't get caught will you xx

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 10:18:00 PM

    Jack, I'm having an early start enjoying my contest...yes, i know I should not be peeking...but, i can't help it.. I'm naughty and have no patients... hugs...pd

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 4:18:00 PM

    This is a sweet entry into PD's contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this clever poem this evening! This was an extremely fun write to read Jack, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:22:00 PM

    Great one for PD on her birthday..I got a chuckle..I know she will love this one..Good luck if this is also a contest..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always encouraging and uplifting..Sara