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Andrea Rose
Date: 6/13/2013 10:18:00 PM
wow, this is an awesome read. great work!
Drake Eszes
Date: 6/13/2013 10:46:00 PM
Good evening, Andrea. Very cool to meet you. Thank you so much for stopping by.
Samia Ali Arroyo
Date: 4/14/2013 1:47:00 PM
What a lovely verse Drake - beautiful... Samia
Drake Eszes
Date: 4/14/2013 2:18:00 PM
Hola, Samia!!! :) Thank you very much for that.
Justin Bordner
Date: 10/21/2012 11:11:00 PM
An unwanted but embraced conflict Drake - a masterful blend of metaphor & similie, quite professional - this elegant poem makes seperation, from many things seem better than possession of comfort - J.A.B. %
Drake Eszes
Date: 10/21/2012 11:34:00 PM
Hey Justin. I am quite thankful for your thoughts on this. On that surface, that's what it seems. Just on the surface...thanks so much!
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/1/2012 5:10:00 PM
Hi Drake, your first image of sad Indians, is a unique one. I like the expression you give on this war...xox~pd
Drake Eszes
Date: 10/1/2012 8:35:00 PM
I had a sense you'd appreciate it. :) Good to see you passing through again. Gracias!
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/1/2012 4:09:00 PM
I like Nette's word for this one: exquiste. that's what this is. Unique and beautiful imagery!!
Drake Eszes
Date: 10/1/2012 8:35:00 PM
I agree. Thank you so much, Andrea! :)
nette onclaud
Date: 10/1/2012 11:50:00 AM
exquisite offering upon which cryptic yet beautiful thoughts take flight... enjoyed how you capped the mood with your end lines, drake.. unusual, creative night to day scene!..:) huggs
Drake Eszes
Date: 10/1/2012 8:35:00 PM
Hi Nette!!! I like my palate to have a little bit of everything during flight. Thank you kindly! "Unusual"? I'm ok with that. :)
Caroline Cécile Delacroix
Date: 10/1/2012 11:15:00 AM
These echoes have already become reality, but change is always around the corner, another day, another season, a different whisper, a source of fresh water to drink... :) Great job with this one! Thanks for the kind comments on my poems. Caroline.
Drake Eszes
Date: 10/1/2012 8:33:00 PM
Yup, they have. I'm always down for a nice glass of water. :) Thank you so much! Oh, you're quite welcome! It's good to visit again.
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2012 1:53:00 PM
A deep poem Drake - Remember a song "Tomorrow never comes" Have a lovely weekend. - Love oxox Anne-Lise :)
Drake Eszes
Date: 9/29/2012 1:55:00 PM
So well said...it's great to hear from you again. :)
Catie Lindsey
Date: 9/29/2012 5:28:00 AM
so awesome. Love the last line completely! hugs, Catie :)
Drake Eszes
Date: 9/29/2012 1:31:00 PM
:) Yeah I'm kind of into the last lines too...