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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 6:43:00 PM
    You should not have written the part where you write my husband filthy letters begging him not to come back to me. I'm your sister who took you in and gave your uneducated incompetent self a job. You chose to plot and blackmail, trick and cheat. You chose to hurt your own sister who loved and cared for you beyond belief. If your story isn't done, then make it better then it has been. Don't hurt anyone the way you hurt me. It is not nice to screw your sister's husband

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:51:00 PM
    Lori, your poetry & your comments are charming. I can't go back after making a poor choice (consequences), but I can learn from the past and let those lessons guide me now. I give myself a break and let my downtrodden inner soul smile a bit more. There's nothing wrong with learning through experience. On a second note, there are many decent guys out there who are not superstars. There are also enticing gamers who are losers in disguise. Your poetry and comments reflect a bright future.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:00:00 AM
    such catchie poems you write Lori - Shaz

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 3:53:00 PM
    nicely penned Lori....thanks for dropping by...hugs...Joseph

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 12:47:00 PM
    Good written Lori ..... The story of your life is not finished yet .... - oxox love Anne-Lise :)