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Crossroad

You walk through the fields, ... I run down the road
One observes, ... the other waiting reaction
A reminder, ... a sigh on the other side
You outlines a word, ... I do not let you express your love
Maybe the pursuit of an illusion ... Perhaps the illusion of a quest

Both in one hope
Just be happy!
               @>----}-- The important thing is to love --{---->@

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  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:52:00 PM

    I respect the juxtapositions of ambitions here Max - superb and concise metaphysical poetry, my favorite type - happiness is indeed a disposition my driend - J.A.B. %

    Diniz Cruzeiro Avatar Max Diniz Cruzeiro Date: 9/29/2012 3:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
    Diniz Cruzeiro Avatar Max Diniz Cruzeiro Date: 9/29/2012 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I believe that the duality is present in relationships. You must place the interests of fitting to find happiness awaited.
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 9:56:00 AM

    awww so nicely done..like like like..thanks for nice share Max <3<3<3 SK

    Diniz Cruzeiro Avatar Max Diniz Cruzeiro Date: 9/29/2012 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello my friend, we learn every day to learn how to live. Thanks for being part of my life. Max