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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:56:00 PM
    WOW! wow... wow!!!! this one is a keeper,,, I hate to say this,, but this is the deepness I'm looking for when it comes to images... what a way to end a lullubye,, we all have to go one way or another,, but this way out bleeds to the max... always~pd

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:19:00 AM
    wonderful descriptions - "Death watches, a new lover awaiting you..." love that line and the next. a great write on a sad topic...

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 4:33:00 AM
    A mesmerizing poem indeed with an almost 'peace' about it , I don't think its like that though. My brother took his own life and there has never been peace for anyone since. Good write though. xx

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:47:00 PM
    This is such a sad and touching write. I wish no one has to go thru it. Well written.

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:44:00 PM
    You are a Dark Poetress, indeed! I love the end rhyme scheme. The poem has a great ebb and flow. Your adjectives are colorful and desriptive. You and the Destroyer (another poetry soup dark poet) ought to get together and paint the night black. A messmerizing poem!