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our talk

Did you not know, 
I needed you so?
why would you ever leave me?
why not let me go?

I sit here in black,
my minds lost all track,
of these strangers leaving flowers for you.
I just want you back!


I am brushing your hair,
they are starting to stare.
must feel bad for the daddy's girl.
this is so unfair!

Now the men are packing your box away.
"I am so sorry for your loss" they say,
but their sorry doesn't give me my Daddy back!
Now with whom can I play.

Mom's so lost in tears,
While I am stuck in fears.
we never even talk to eachother anymore
I just wish you were here.

Here I sit alone.
Talking to your stone.
It makes no sense to hug your dirt and cry
But, at least it's better then going home.



                                                                     Katei

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  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:23:00 PM

    "talking to your stone" that line stopped me in my tracks my grandma pretty much raised me because my mom was sick my whole childhood. Now she is gone and when i go visit her i sit there for hours and cant leave, just "talking to her stone"

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/8/2012 9:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's the story of my life right there, I am glad someone else truly understands how hard it is to have so many things to say so many questions yet, that stone never speaks back and doesn't have arms to hold you. yet, you need to be there, it's an inexplainable feeling. Thank you for reading it. thanks more for feeling it!
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 6:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest Kathryn. Love, Carol

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/8/2012 9:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol for both the congrats and the visit, they are very much appreciated
  1. Date: 10/4/2012 10:00:00 AM

    This touched my heart Kathryn, a very emotional write!

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/8/2012 9:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much.
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:42:00 AM

    SAd one. Well done in the contest, Kathryn. Big congrats to you.

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/3/2012 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, and Thanks for reading.
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 6:17:00 AM

    Very touching Katherine , congratulations xx

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/3/2012 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:38:00 PM

    Excellent write here Kathryn!! regards INK-U-SCRIPT

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/2/2012 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much!!!!
  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Kathryn, a beautiful but touching poem - well written. Have a lovely afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/2/2012 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I appreciate your kind words.
  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:12:00 PM

    KATHRYN :-) A wonderful congratulations in Craig's "Night-Dark-Black-Happy-Sad" contest. Nice reading and supporting all his winners. have a nice and wonderful day, *PD

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/2/2012 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww Thank you. hope your day goes well also.
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:02:00 PM

    beautifully sad...Congratulations on your win friend Kathryn…cheers and hugs!! (^_^)

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/2/2012 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, for both the compliment and the congrats. hugs right back ;D
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:08:00 PM

    So sad, and touching. well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/2/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, and thanks for reading.
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:54:00 PM

    Once again, nice poem... Congratulations on your win!! Terry

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 10/2/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much!!! I didn't even know I had won. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:55:00 AM

    Poignant... very nice! Terry

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 9/28/2012 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. this was pretty personel to write, glad you liked it. Thanks for the visit.