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STAMPEDES 'round the kids

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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STAMPEDES 'round the kids

   STAMPEDES 'round the screen,
         STAMPEDES 'round the kids,                                T
                  Scritch   scratch       'round                                 N
                  !   Their      match.      Everybody                        E
                  i      Aims  to  catch                                         W
                  !          Mom's batch of little gamers.
                              P                                      !                   P
                              E                                      !                  E
                              D                                      !                   D
                              END 'EM ALL      Leave    alone                A
                              STAMPEDES!      our video kids!               G 

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:09:00 PM
    you have such an imagination!! I see this also had won a contest a long time ago. Belated congrats.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:22:00 PM
    Reminds me of the video games before all the graphics, even the font choice adds to the overall effect. This must have been a lot of work.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 1/13/2013 4:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    O, Rick! Btw: I'd like to change the title "Stampedes 'round the screens" into "Stampedes 'round the kids"... How does it sound to your ears and gears? A question to the Question Man!
    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 1/13/2013 4:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So nice to re-read your kind comments, Rick! I'm on the way to visit you and your poems and your newest poetry forms today! Have a nice day! Blessings, Hanitra!
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:32:00 PM
    Congratulations on this winning entry Hanitra. Very clever!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:27:00 AM
    Love this !! I see it won a contest as well !! Congrats !! I don't understand video games, but my grandchildren love them and spend way too much time playing them. I like this unusual poem...and how it stampedes all over the page !!

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 3:47:00 PM
    V R-A.,, congratulations in RIX's "VIDEO GAME EXTRAVAGANZA" gaming contest.. :-) always~pd

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:58:00 PM
    Voahan, congrats on your win, very clever...David

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Video Game" contest Voahanitriniain. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 10:08:00 PM
    Your creativity is celebrated with this Honorable Mention in my Video Game Poetry contest..wonderful shape poem! gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 8:47:00 AM
    A well done shape poem. Nice to read some of your poems today.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:43:00 AM
    Excellent one that instantly describes a house with children..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by..Sara