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perfect

love has to be perfect
in each and every way

love cannot hesitate 
while eyes watch and wait

love should be original
spontaneous and surprise

love should be truthful 
not tainted with lies

love should be monogamous
that means one on one

love is full of sacrifices
each one nobley done

love should be forever
and never not die

love should show it's jealousy
to it's loved ones eye's

love is certianly the reason
of why someone cries

love should be a comfort 
always near by

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  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:31:00 AM
    amazing flow..deep message :-)

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 3:57:00 PM
    great sentiment and poetry

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/13/2012 11:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Loving III -- How did I get such a 'Loving' surname wrong below? Maybe it was subconscious -- the absence of your good, 'Loving' ways. John 'The Situation Hating III would be a more apt name for you anyway. How long did you figure I would turn the other cheek before I started retaliating against you? Too bad some of the other poets that you prayed upon like a serial-rapist have since left this site. How long have you been a bully for now? How many years has it been? Long enough for many soupers, that's for sure....
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/13/2012 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Loving III -- How did I get such a 'Loving' surname wrong below? Maybe it was subconscious -- the absence of your good, 'Loving' ways. John 'The Situation Hating III would be a more apt name for you anyway. How long did you figure I would turn the other cheek before I started retaliating against you? Too bad some of the other poets that you prayed upon like a serial-rapist have since left this site. How long have you been a bully for now? How many years has it been? Long enough for many soupers, that's for sure....
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/12/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Irving III' -- As I have already mentioned to you, I obviously had you blocked, but you continue to slither onto the replies of comments left on my poems. If someone blocks me, I respect their human right and freedom to do so. I do not infringe upon their human rights by forcing myself onto their poems via the reply section of unblocked comments. YOU JUST WON'T STOP DOING IT, SO HERE I AM. As much as you see yourself as being morally superior, you are delusional, for your morals aren't saintly at all. Far from it.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/12/2012 4:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Irving III' -- As I have already mentioned to you, I obviously had you blocked, but you continue to slither onto the replies of comments left on my poems. If someone blocks me, I respect their human right and freedom to do so. I do not infringe upon their human rights by forcing myself onto their poems via the reply section of unblocked comments. YOU JUST WON'T STOP DOING IT, SO HERE I AM. As much as you see yourself as being morally superior, you are delusional, for your morals aren't saintly at all. Far from it.
  1. Date: 10/3/2012 6:39:00 AM
    Hey John. nice poem, enjoyed the flow - Shaz

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:13:00 PM
    yet when you find originality you try to mould it into conventionality!

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/13/2012 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Loving III -- How did I get such a 'Loving' surname wrong below? Maybe it was subconscious -- the absence of your good, 'Loving' ways. John 'The Situation Hating III would be a more apt name for you anyway. How long did you figure I would turn the other cheek before I started retaliating against you? Too bad some of the other poets that you prayed upon like a serial-rapist have since left this site. How long have you been a bully for now? How many years has it been? Long enough for many soupers, that's for sure....
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/13/2012 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Loving III -- How did I get such a 'Loving' surname wrong below? Maybe it was subconscious -- the absence of your good, 'Loving' ways. John 'The Situation Hating III would be a more apt name for you anyway. How long did you figure I would turn the other cheek before I started retaliating against you? Too bad some of the other poets that you prayed upon like a serial-rapist have since left this site. How long have you been a bully for now? How many years has it been? Long enough for many soupers, that's for sure....
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/12/2012 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Irving III' -- As I have already mentioned to you, I obviously had you blocked, but you continue to slither onto the replies of comments left on my poems. If someone blocks me, I respect their human right and freedom to do so. I do not infringe upon their human rights by forcing myself onto their poems via the reply section of unblocked comments. YOU JUST WON'T STOP DOING IT, SO HERE I AM. As much as you see yourself as being morally superior, you are delusional, for your morals aren't saintly at all. Far from it.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/12/2012 4:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Irving III' -- As I have already mentioned to you, I obviously had you blocked, but you continue to slither onto the replies of comments left on my poems. If someone blocks me, I respect their human right and freedom to do so. I do not infringe upon their human rights by forcing myself onto their poems via the reply section of unblocked comments. YOU JUST WON'T STOP DOING IT, SO HERE I AM. As much as you see yourself as being morally superior, you are delusional, for your morals aren't saintly at all. Far from it.
    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 9/28/2012 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Now that's poetry.
    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 9/28/2012 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Their tied together.
    Puddifoot Avatar Charlotte Puddifoot
    Date: 9/28/2012 5:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    but I prefer this side of you to the banging-on-about-religion one
  1. Date: 9/27/2012 2:15:00 PM
    so true, John. My favorite line is, "love should be truthful not tainted with lies." So nice to read your poetry today. love and hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 1:42:00 PM
    *.* Are You Sure Your Not A Woman John ? Hahaha, Just Kidding Because Your Words Are Sooo Soft & Tender ˜ I Love It Like That, & Everything That Your Precious Heart Spoken Is True; Wonderful ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 1:22:00 PM
    A perfect..ly love-ly poem about perfect love! Terry

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 1:04:00 PM
    Awesome piece written here! Just imagine if this world was actually "perfect."..I would stay in love..lol