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Return ticket

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Return ticket

My heart and my head are at war.
My head whispers, no more.
It is inevitable,
no matter how delectable.
There is no way it is meant to last,
but my heart still beats too fast.

I have a return ticket to Love.

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  1. Date: 10/6/2012 7:08:00 PM

    I hope your love lasts.... I'm a fool for happy endings! Direct and tangible writing.. Congratulations! Victoria (an Alaskan in Kenya)

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 12:42:00 PM

    Just lovely Johann! The last line is the punch line - it sums up the poem very well. Nice!

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 9:23:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Johann. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:14:00 AM

    aaaaahhhhh,sweet, true romantic.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 4:42:00 AM

    Didn't know where you were going to take this one Johann, really enjoyed the read today.. Welcome to Poetrysoup :) tc Wilma