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Ode to Autumn

Smooth green leaves,
are becoming dry bitter things,
almost sleeping,
their fate coming
to a gentle close, slow,
seeping crimson into the vein;
Your death is immaculate,
Re-birth.

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:25:00 PM

    Beautifully put and you really captured the cycle of life and death, the way you describe the leaf's vein, it comes alive and suddenly oh so sad, it's dying as are we.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 12:48:00 PM

    uplifting and promising, thank you for sharing, un poeme qui vole aux vent translation: A poem that flies in the wind xxx vie