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Alone

As time rolls on by
a dream, the same dream
of our life together,
alas always about the memory
as light as a feather
in Technicolour
at one’s tether,
that makes life tough
like a flower of love
alone in an acre of corn.

© Harry j Horsman 2012

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:15:00 PM

    Wow, this is so gorgeous. The last two lines are my favorite, they are written so perfect. Splendid, VERY splendid write!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 9:52:00 AM

    beautifully written poem friend Harry..thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 4:03:00 PM

    ah yes the dreams of yester-year, when life was young and sweet, the age demon shifts a gear, as homeward bound we creep, doth sneer:) bit queer, i'll belt the little creep:) re Harry Horsman "Alone" Don

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:13:00 PM

    Harry, this poem is wonderful. it cuts deep...but it a good alone feeling... good night... pd

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:33:00 PM

    Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:11:00 PM

    Yes, I remember this beauty too. Well, can't wait to see you back here. I'm still not able to come to soup often. So I am at my job trying to catch up! HOpe you are having a great getaway. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:43:00 PM

    A very special poem Harry, love it. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:06:00 AM

    sad but well expressed! Thanks for sharing and thank you for the comments on my poem. Caroline.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 2:31:00 AM

    Excellent. Very moving write. Ending is goo. Tfs

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:35:00 AM

    Just nature modifies the same thing again and again by giving next shapes physical or non physical. Nice philosophical poem, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 12:55:00 AM

    captivating words harry.. the last line is like whoa!

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 5:34:00 PM

    Wow, Harry!...Beautiful poem about lost love...I can surely identify!...Last 2 lines knocked me out! - Tim

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:07:00 PM

    wow, such a powerful ending, Harry. awesome write, my friend - Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 10:18:00 PM

    Memories can be ugly things, especially when the hurt. Thank you for your comments on A Dirty Basement Room. Linda

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 9:54:00 PM

    A beautiful poem that came from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 9:04:00 AM

    MARVELOUS ANALOGIES HARRY LUV .. THE BEAUTY OF LOVE SHOWS BRIGHTLY AND ITS STRUGGLE AS A FLOWER ALONE IN CORN FIELD TO STAY STRONG AND GROW .. ENCOURAGING PIECE MY FRIEND ..

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 7:46:00 AM

    A unique write,Harry.The two last lines are just spectacular!

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 5:39:00 AM

    So wonderful, so deep and unique!

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 4:23:00 AM

    beautiful images and reflective mood,harry... they seem to flow together wonderfully and end in a subtle yet compelling way. wow!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 1:46:00 AM

    soups

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:53:00 PM

    I can so relate to this one, harry, and the last two lines are outstanding, which reminds me of the birthday card, which shows a lone person in a field. You open the card and it says "for someone who is Out standing in his field" Anyway, thanks for posting three new poems recently.loved them all.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:28:00 PM

    Wow, this is not where I would like to be...alone. uniquely written Harry. Thanks for reading me. One love Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:24:00 PM

    Sometimes these feathered memories lift us to happier times, some time they send us diving into the depths of grief....but always leave myself feeling so alone...even in a crowd. Enjoyed your poem !! Thanks for dropping by my page..

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 12:42:00 PM

    Wonderful, moving piece! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 11:15:00 AM

    GREAT PASSION MAYBVE TIME IS A HEALER NICE WRITE THANKS FOR COMMENTS ON MINE DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 11:04:00 AM

    great ending! i like this poem a lot...

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:51:00 AM

    Yup,that last line says it all...Geez!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:43:00 AM

    Those last two line speak volumes xx

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Perfect description. The last line just wows me with its imagery!