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A bomb back to Vienna

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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A bomb back to Vienna

Sooo, ya think you're THE ace
In this jingle jangle place, UHH!?
And you're proud, OOH, SOO proud !
And you're talking here so loud...
That nobody ever noticed
That you're offering a contest
With a weird melody
I would call cacophony...
If an English word exists
To describe your foolish lists !


O.K. Don't you cry like this
Or I would call you Elvis
For the rest of your life...
By the way, I met your wife
And I told her, once again,
How frustrated I remain
Every time I see your pages,
I wish I'd put these images
on my own imagination:
WHATCHA goo' job you done, son ! 

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  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Things that make you go hmmmm. Light & Love

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/25/2013 12:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Debbie! Thanks for all your visits and much appreciated comments! Love, Hanitra
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 5:22:00 PM
    Your write looks...familiar? Are you posting poems under another name? OK, anyways...I really like this poem, Voahanitriniaina. Very nice. Ruben.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/18/2012 8:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No, it's the first time I join a community for my poems in english, Ruben. I'm so shy I had to wait for such a friendly community as the Soup. I right away liked the atmosphere and the uplifting comments. And very useful ones too, about the forms: I tend to write somewhat "wildly", as my husband says. But hre loves it...:) Blessings, Hanitra
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 6:00:00 AM
    this is so powerful, and a wonderful poem....

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/18/2012 8:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Harry; I just hope it's not too punchy for poor Vie! Blessings, Hanitra
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 6:10:00 AM
    Hanitra! You sure dropped a bomb on her! ha ha...Enjoyed the strong dialect in this one...someone in this collab is an excellent rapper! Keep the ink flowing! g.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/18/2012 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks once more for stopping by my work.. On the way to pay a visit to your newest poems! Love, Hanitra
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 10:11:00 AM
    I like your style! Thanks for visiting my work. Have a good weekend.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/18/2012 8:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks once more for the idea of writing Haiku in a different way: it's a new rhythm that will sure be successful! And the new name, Questionku, that you invented for it just refers to a universal quality of humanity: always questioning about anything and everything worth of it! Very interesting invention; your examples of Questionku are very good samples of your ...product:) Blessings, Hanitra
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:22:00 AM
    Your style exploded all over the page. Contemptuous praise with a touch of sarcastic rage. A sneaky little dig with back door harmony. You wrapped it up somewhere else beyond where I can see. :) Keep it going Voahan. :) Just kidding Hanitra. Have a good day new poet pal.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:11:00 PM
    A great write once again hanitra, and I see you are new to the soup , welcome and keep up the good work xx

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 7:42:00 AM
    Wow! A strong write,Rabary:-) Great work,keep your poetry busy;)