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Emotonal Suicide

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Emotonal Suicide

right now she sets there crying all alone,
after cleaning that house that you call home.
she waits for you through all hours of the night
and you ignore all her cell phone calls,isn't that right?

Just a kid when she settled on you
too young to have thought it through
you remind her of how "worthless" she is
and how you don't even want her kiss

She goes to shower to cry her cries
she prays to God before wiping her eyes
she returns to your room, right there by your side
but, she just commited emotional suicide

it will be hard to notice at first, for you
but slowly you will see it the way I do
She won't respond to the words you throw
and when you take off she will just let you go.

she wont even look at you with love in her eyes
you will never again be able to make her cry
she already told all her heartache goodbye
when she commited emotional suicide.

The funniest thing about this story, you will learn
Is that you will miss that love, that you never earned
their is no escaping its loss, no, nowhere to hide
she will find herself, after her emotional suicide.

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  1. Date: 11/3/2013 8:35:00 PM
    A message for all those men out there who don't appreciate the good women they have... MC

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 11/4/2013 11:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    true story! lol..... THANK YOU FOR THE VISIT, Katei
  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:03:00 AM
    Good work. I would say it was a perfect poem, your poetry is so nice i think i might read some more :)

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 9/26/2012 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, I read some of your work and was blown away. you are very talented at bringing forth emotions that people try so hard to burry keep up the good work, I love it when a poet sheds light on the darkest parts of the human soul
  1. Date: 9/26/2012 8:19:00 AM
    Very sad and a reality for too many women. I really love the last verse - how he will miss the love and how she will find herself :)

    ramirez Avatar kathryn ramirez
    Date: 9/26/2012 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Susan, I agree, it happens way too much to women today. I am lucky enough not to be in this situation, but I wrote this one in particular for a very close friend of mine. and the last verse is the truest, because he will realize what he had when she is gone, and she will realize she can do better but she won't recognize her soulmate til she knows her own soul. thank you for reading my poem I appreciate that very much.