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  1. Date: 7/26/2013 5:39:00 PM
    So I read this out loud and the word 'love' kept going in the space provided. Anyhow, very interesting work. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:26:00 AM
    Nope! If an auto- proclaimed free verse poem taste like a prose poem is just because it's not a Free Verse poem. You can call it Hybridization of open verse and prose... or a "new style", a free verse does not need to use consistent meter patterns, rhyme, or any other musical pattern...but has to follow the rhythm of natural speech...if not, it's an essay! LOL!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 9:23:00 PM
    It wasn't 'Orgasmatron' for me to read but I agree a journey without substance is not really living.

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/4/2012 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah, I don't have expectations of everyone enjoying my poetry. As long a one or two people enjoy my poems, I am more than happy. Either way, thank you for reading this poem. Btw - yes, a journey without substance is not really living, but I was actually getting at something else as well with the whole journey/destination aspect.
  1. Date: 9/30/2012 12:57:00 AM
    An 'orgasmic' splurge of emotion! Intricate...moving... Terry (& good message!)

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 3:13:00 PM
    well Chris there is plenty of climax here, within the poem, which of course is more than a destination.. love your 'purity of the moment' I like this it takes me on a journey, not quiet sure if it's a sexual one, more of survival!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 6:11:00 AM
    Only love matters...I believe in you, my Love. With you, each moment is pure...Really enjoyed the hypnotic quality of this poem...Brilliant writing.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:17:00 AM
    I feel the heat too Chris, in fact I feel quite breathless, love your poem, love as ever Elizabeth xox

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 12:40:00 AM
    This is quite a write Chris. Yes we need tobeleive in more than a destination.