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Somethings Got To Give

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Somethings Got To Give

Reality became their fantasy as fantasy was, their reality....
Wondering what to do and how would I say; no instruction manual 
Nor crumpled pages ? So I just barricaded time after kicking in the door
Slid by your side; then sit amid the perfect silence until I touched 
Your beauty; knowing while watching these mountains washed away 
Into the healing sea that, everything, is possible for you and me....
...."Somethings Got To Give" *

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  1. Date: 10/4/2012 4:22:00 AM
    men always do the impossible for the girl... very persistant... this is very inspirational... Love Mohini....

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 4:32:00 PM
    real men do kick down doors...and shed tears...... always love reading your dynamic and elegant words Victoria

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:12:00 AM
    I thought about the movie "Something Has Got To Give" when I saw the title even though that is not what it says..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 10:12:00 PM this line..'So I just barricaded time...' what a vision, Tristen. As always...good to read you. "Somethings Got to Give" I'm adding to my list of favs. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 1:54:00 PM
    You have an amazing way with words and thoughts.

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 11:42:00 AM
    another creative poem from you...thanks for sharing friend Tristen and thanks for your comments. have a blessed day always! huggsss!! :)

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:05:00 AM
    A beguiling write. I love the ending, and the images it projects!.....I'll let you in on a lil secret, I'm a man. Lol, the pic I had up was my youngest daughter. Lmao, thanks for stopping by poet!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 11:58:00 PM
    I really admire your poetry, Tristin. Thank you for reading my poems and for your encouraging words.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 7:00:00 PM
    Very nice poem, Tristin. I can just see you kicking in the door. hugs, Catie :)