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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:01:00 PM
    typo... left out the H in have... pd

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:00:00 PM
    Tick tock,, tick tock,,, like the movies,, the grandfather clock is always a mind blowing,, leaves the air, all creepy.. this poem is very gripping ..hope you were going for that image,, thank you for inviting me over to read your poetry... I have not forgotten you.. Sometimes I do not know who wants to be read. Posting, is only posting till the poet makes movements and wants to be read.. You truly are one of the best here on the soup.. but, i ave told you this before.. always ~PD

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:34:00 AM
    Lisa, this is so sad and profound. I often think of this myself and have written about it. I think the older we become,the more we write these kinds of poems. btw, thanks so much for my win in your last contest. I was totally shocked to see I won it because I was not sure what you wanted but it was a very nice surprise. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:58:00 PM
    wow tic tok lIfe ticking away,great write DP

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 2:44:00 PM
    You may not believe this but I wrote a poem in my head last night called tick tock. The first time in months I stayed in bed and had a few hours sleep I had forgotten until reading this has brought it back to me , not as good as this but there you go .xx