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paradise:lost


felt like i did before thats how i know i missed ya
if i could then i woulda grabbed ya hugged and kissed ya
bachelor for eternity missing the bigger picture
you i barely knew, appearing on every vista
i appreciate the support, but what i need is love
tho truth may hurt, better than all of the above
i trusted you cause you represent something ive never done,
who knew that two can prove to be better than one or
first in a place, never won a sum,
bygones gone and a couple of puns
we let the honey run till sweet enough touch
beat around the bush, no rush
it got hotter but the wetaher didnt change 
not a cloud in the sky or a drop of blame
no need for a why whenw e had an x
we gotta where we wanted then decided what next

no matter where i go 
over land and sea
id rather have you cause one is lonely 
keep me company
three not necessary
feels real comfy
has since february

february march april may june july august in a day
the longer we go the more we grow
feeling better each step of the way

if theres a problem we can talk and double check
nothing we cant solve with an embrace and kiss to the face or neck
i love you more than ode and penelope. maria odb
or lil kim and biggie
thank the gods we aint in a greek tragedy
or sometime before 19 sixty
for what is feminin
sent me to my questionin
i quickly collected evidence, respect
exactly what i expected, experiencing the extension
my seconds, perspective as my lessons
i remember when im stressing
to fit into my senses, lower my defenses
soothing if theres tenseness, leaving room for suggestion
did i mention that youre precious
a gift of personal appreciation, when we regard eachother
in highest celebration shared by lovers, so more than any i thank you
for willing to get as close as you do
i hope for you the complimentary is true
im sure if it wasnt we can talk it through its coo
right there is reason why i call you boo

no matter where i go 
over land and sea
id rather have you cause one is lonely 
keep me company
three not necessary
feels real comfy
has since february

february march april may june july august in a day
the longer we go the more we grow
feeling beter each step of the way

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  1. Date: 10/2/2012 11:11:00 PM

    Lovely write Davin! Love how you've referenced various couples in connection to your own. Nice! Very nice!

    Payne Avatar Davin Payne Date: 10/5/2012 12:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for seeing that. I really appreciate it. <3
  1. Date: 9/30/2012 9:51:00 AM

    A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Davin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

    Payne Avatar Davin Payne Date: 9/30/2012 4:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Carol. I have been making my way through the site, and there is undoubtedly many talented poets.
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 1:17:00 PM

    awww this is reaaly nice

    Payne Avatar Davin Payne Date: 9/28/2012 2:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it was for girlfriend at the time, she didnt appreciate it much.