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Spring Talk

Don't push me down with all your might I may recoil and hit you back
Sept. 25, 2012

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  1. Date: 5/7/2013 9:56:00 AM

    Amazing vibes... This is rich in my book. Congrats Leonara~A.O

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 5:59:00 PM

    Hi Sweet Leo,,, that was a nice try... But, I like this senryu.. I laughed my butt off, reading this one once again...I gave you an HM,, just for trying out my contest, and making me laugh... LOL... love you always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:17:00 PM

    hi sis-ie.... here is a tune for you...Butterfly in the sky I can go twice as high Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow I can go anywhere Friends to know And ways to grow A Reading Rainbow I can be anything Take a look It's in a book A Reading Rainbow A Reading Rainbow

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:14:00 PM

    My first wife was a Libra, a very gentle soul Love and hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 9:56:00 PM

    I love being a Libra... It's finally nice to know another female Libra, every Libra I know, are males.. :-( LOL... pd

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 9:54:00 PM

    Hi Leonora, I was thinking about your birthday as well.. I have something special for you.. I do not want to get the date wrong, is it October 4th or 5th... I have an x -boyfriend who's birthday is October 8th... So i mixed all the days in my head.. Please . let me know before you log off... PLEASE..... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 12:01:00 PM

    I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL ON THAT ONE MATE WHEN I WROTE TEN IT WAS INSPIERD BY THE OLD SAYING TEN NINE EIGHT ETC COOL IN YOUR FACE POEM XX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 11:56:00 AM

    very nice Senyu..I like it my friend Nore...I will experiment next time :) Good day!!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:10:00 PM

    lol, good for you, my friend - don't let anyone mess with you. Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 8:11:00 AM

    I thought of a season and something different popped up. I see some spunk in these lines that says you're nobody to fool with. I like this :) Love Lizzie

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 6:21:00 AM

    Thank you so much my dearest friends on the soup for liking this poem of mine. May I explain further why I've chosen this theme. Sometimes, I think I am a person who is like a spring but, a spring who only reacts when I’ve already counted 'til 4-5 that means, too much compression starts to hurt. LOL. i love you all!!!! muahhh...

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 9:05:00 PM

    A very powerful senryu Leonora. I can relate. Outstanding!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 8:39:00 PM

    Yes bouncing back at every hit is the right way to react... love your senryu... hope Susan loves it tooooooooo,,, Leonora, standing up to every push down action is the way I like to take life in the face... ha ha..you hit it with a good one... love it...always~pd

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/5/2013 5:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you see I love it here too... LOL
  1. Date: 9/25/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Good one Leonora - Girls can do more than smile! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:04:00 PM

    Someone might get back more than they bargained for in the springback...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 10:21:00 AM

    nicely written Leonora...thanks for stopping by...hugs...Joseph

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 7:14:00 AM

    good threat....love it!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 12:13:00 AM

    Very good Senryu Leonora!I love the title of your poem.

    Galinta Avatar Leonora Galinta Date: 9/25/2012 12:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ha ha ha.. thank you Kash.
  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:43:00 PM

    GOOD one, Leonora. So what made you choose the title of Spring Talk for this one?

    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 9/25/2012 12:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Like a compressed spring she will come back,Andie:)