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J E P D

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J E P D

is Elohim a democracy
of Father Son and Holy Spirit

or Yehweh God and law
the kingdom over those who fear it

to each his own was given a thread
to sew a book with seeds

to each his own given the bread
to sup with the God he see's

when they tell the story twice
find the facts and advice

when from confusion we try to define
which is human and which divine

is it prosecution of defence
for each would have their own pretence

and we few so called scholars
interpet thing that so few ponder

grace and mercy verses the law
these are the facts the interpeters saw

intricatly placed in a complicated code
it's past our future in Hebrew told

Higher  Critics reviel the Redactors pen
the priest of the period their voices with in

a nation devided with two sets of kings
a tradition of writing  often the same thing

where do we find ourselves in this hegenomy
have not our captors a prodigality

and they that wrote the story now told
mixed are they that would be sold

another mystery to figure God out
only time can reviel what it's all about

but God in His wisdom left us clues
evidence of His being; things to use

a construction He bids us to put together
a story only He knew better

who guided the hand of the "Pious Fraud"
molded his motives with what he saw

remade Moses into a king
but sadly mistaken about one thing

one thing i learned and always heard
it's not about us it's about His Word

His Word, His bond, His Covenet that's true
one single story from old testament to new

the bible was writen by God alone
everything i'm feeling is God owned

by the inspiration of the Holy Spirit
writen in books so men could hear it

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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 6:11:00 PM
    Thank you John for the comments, you are still wonderful to me. I see April has her birthday on April first... I have a nephew who's birthday on the first. I find it exciting. How do you celebrate, if u don't mind me asking. ...xox..pd

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 10:11:00 PM
    that is one thing that we forget that God made every thing and we have so much to learn. Hope all is well with you. Will drop a note as have been busy and computer had to be cleared due to a virus. love phyl

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Loving III -- How did I get such a 'Loving' surname wrong below? Maybe it was subconscious -- the absence of your good, 'Loving' ways. John 'The Situation Hating III would be a more apt name for you anyway. How long did you figure I would turn the other cheek before I started retaliating against you? Too bad some of the other poets that you prayed upon like a serial-rapist have since left this site. How long have you been a bully for now? How many years has it been? Long enough for many soupers, that's for sure....
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Loving III -- How did I get such a 'Loving' surname wrong below? Maybe it was subconscious -- the absence of your good, 'Loving' ways. John 'The Situation Hating III would be a more apt name for you anyway. How long did you figure I would turn the other cheek before I started retaliating against you? Too bad some of the other poets that you prayed upon like a serial-rapist have since left this site. How long have you been a bully for now? How many years has it been? Long enough for many soupers, that's for sure....
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/12/2012 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Irving III' -- As I have already mentioned to you, I obviously had you blocked, but you continue to slither onto the replies of comments left on my poems. If someone blocks me, I respect their human right and freedom to do so. I do not infringe upon their human rights by forcing myself onto their poems via the reply section of unblocked comments. YOU JUST WON'T STOP DOING IT, SO HERE I AM. As much as you see yourself as being morally superior, you are delusional, for your morals aren't saintly at all. Far from it.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/12/2012 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Irving III' -- As I have already mentioned to you, I obviously had you blocked, but you continue to slither onto the replies of comments left on my poems. If someone blocks me, I respect their human right and freedom to do so. I do not infringe upon their human rights by forcing myself onto their poems via the reply section of unblocked comments. YOU JUST WON'T STOP DOING IT, SO HERE I AM. As much as you see yourself as being morally superior, you are delusional, for your morals aren't saintly at all. Far from it.
  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:39:00 PM
    Why are people. Afraid to comment here? Surely there are bible scholars here. Why don't they comment?!

    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Loving III -- How did I get such a 'Loving' surname wrong below? Maybe it was subconscious -- the absence of your good, 'Loving' ways. John 'The Situation Hating III would be a more apt name for you anyway. How long did you figure I would turn the other cheek before I started retaliating against you? Too bad some of the other poets that you prayed upon like a serial-rapist have since left this site. How long have you been a bully for now? How many years has it been? Long enough for many soupers, that's for sure....
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Invading your work!? You were bully for 2 years asshole. It's only been a day on my part. Don't like it very much, do you?
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/13/2012 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Loving III -- How did I get such a 'Loving' surname wrong below? Maybe it was subconscious -- the absence of your good, 'Loving' ways. John 'The Situation Hating III would be a more apt name for you anyway. How long did you figure I would turn the other cheek before I started retaliating against you? Too bad some of the other poets that you prayed upon like a serial-rapist have since left this site. How long have you been a bully for now? How many years has it been? Long enough for many soupers, that's for sure....
    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 10/13/2012 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Please ignore this person invading my work.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/12/2012 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Irving III' -- As I have already mentioned to you, I obviously had you blocked, but you continue to slither onto the replies of comments left on my poems. If someone blocks me, I respect their human right and freedom to do so. I do not infringe upon their human rights by forcing myself onto their poems via the reply section of unblocked comments. YOU JUST WON'T STOP DOING IT, SO HERE I AM. As much as you see yourself as being morally superior, you are delusional, for your morals aren't saintly at all. Far from it.
    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 10/12/2012 5:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    @John 'The Situation' Irving III' -- As I have already mentioned to you, I obviously had you blocked, but you continue to slither onto the replies of comments left on my poems. If someone blocks me, I respect their human right and freedom to do so. I do not infringe upon their human rights by forcing myself onto their poems via the reply section of unblocked comments. YOU JUST WON'T STOP DOING IT, SO HERE I AM. As much as you see yourself as being morally superior, you are delusional, for your morals aren't saintly at all. Far from it.
  1. Date: 9/24/2012 8:09:00 PM
    John, thank you for the lovely verse... I love being owned by the Holy Ghost .... an excellent poem, expressed with your concept... i like it...xox~pd