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A Travelling Sage

There once was a travelling sage

Who yet lived to a very old age.

      Well becoming quite senile,

      With problems (yes penile),

The reader may choose:

1) He kept his packed trunk in a cage.

or

2) He packed his wee trunk in a rage.

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  1. Date: 3/21/2013 2:55:00 AM

    Great fun to read

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 10:28:00 AM

    LOL, love the reader's choice punchline too - number two, I think : )

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 8:18:00 AM

    can't decide. Your mind can be dangerous.

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 6:35:00 PM

    yep, number two!!!

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 12:15:00 PM

    AGAIN LIKE AN OLD TALE COOL WRITE DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:32:00 PM

    The second for me is definitely the better choice. But does it matter if it's packed or unpacked? Just saying "packed" makes for a better beat!!

    O'Leary Avatar Terry O'Leary Date: 9/27/2012 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the opinion and advice, Andrea! I've fixed it according to your inspiration... Terry
  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:19:00 PM

    lol, love your limericks : )

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 8:59:00 AM

    humorus.....

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 12:38:00 AM

    Hahaha...enjoyed this funny Limerick very much!

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:57:00 PM

    This is hilarious. Wonderful Limerick

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 6:36:00 PM

    I have a couple of extra lines for you. His ruddy trunk turning beige. His shrunken compartments could no longer engage.