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Stitchin Blues

Stitchin’ Blues Sad woman sittin’ by a window sill. Sad woman knittin’ time - time to kill. Oh my Jesus. Has a husband he’s in prison, killed her lover - he ain’t risen. Oh my! Jesus gave her freedom, loosed the chains, forgave them all, OUR GOD REIGNS! OH MY JESUS! But she’s settin’ still regrettin’ ain’t forgiving - sure ain’t living. Oh my, Jesus. Let it go, all one can do, Jesus loves you; it be true. Oh? My Jesus? Done is done, end of that; forgive yourself - ‘s where it’s at. Oh. My Jesus paid them dues, that ain’t news, so why you sing them cryin’ blues? Oh my Jesus. End of song, so she sits, killing time while she knits stitchin’ blues.
*revised per Dannyboy request

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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:13:00 AM

    I love it! Breathtaking flow in this wonderful poem (or song?). Great work, John! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:30:00 PM

    I read it first, then had to sing it. I could hear better voices singing it than mine. Truly enjoyed it and wanted it to go on for more verses. Mahalo

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:08:00 PM

    Are you a musician too? I hear a song in my head! Yes, I agree with Carol Eastman, its "Dylan-esque"

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:31:00 PM

    Hey,hey! There we go! I came back to read it again,and what do I find? An X-celent finish! Very nice my friend... :o)

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 10/9/2012 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Stay away from the Rebbecca! BS.. It's a virus!!!
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Quite a unique write. Very thought provoking. Like Ralph says very much like Dylan.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:30:00 PM

    nice. reminds me of "tangled up in blue" by bob dylan for some reason? warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 12:42:00 AM

    Wow, JPS.... Nice, REALLY enjoyed!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 12:51:00 PM

    I think you're missing a couple verses here? I wanted more?End of song came to quick? Ha,ha..Still,great as always.. :o)