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  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:13:00 AM
    I love it! Breathtaking flow in this wonderful poem (or song?). Great work, John! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 10:30:00 PM
    I read it first, then had to sing it. I could hear better voices singing it than mine. Truly enjoyed it and wanted it to go on for more verses. Mahalo

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:08:00 PM
    Are you a musician too? I hear a song in my head! Yes, I agree with Carol Eastman, its "Dylan-esque"

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 11:31:00 PM
    Hey,hey! There we go! I came back to read it again,and what do I find? An X-celent finish! Very nice my friend... :o)

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    Date: 10/9/2012 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Stay away from the Rebbecca! BS.. It's a virus!!!
  1. Date: 10/5/2012 12:30:00 PM
    Quite a unique write. Very thought provoking. Like Ralph says very much like Dylan.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:30:00 PM
    nice. reminds me of "tangled up in blue" by bob dylan for some reason? warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 12:42:00 AM
    Wow, JPS.... Nice, REALLY enjoyed!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 12:51:00 PM
    I think you're missing a couple verses here? I wanted more?End of song came to quick? Ha,ha..Still,great as always.. :o)