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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 4:42:00 AM
    Ah John, a happy ending to this amazing tale, I bet you tell some wild stories to your grandchildren. Your story beats the original hands down and it makes my day just reading it.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:12:00 PM
    Haha! Love the twist to the story! Do you have one for "Goldilocks" or "Little Red Riding Hood" too???

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 2:39:00 PM
    ABSOLUTELY DEEEELIGHTFUL, my friend John! A familiar old tale with a twist... GREAT! Cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:28:00 PM
    A real hoot of a tale John; it was a true snoutfull of a write. with all turning out well on their literary nights.." No doubt the k9 and swine now swill the finest Of wines..!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Ah, this made me smile, John! What a very nice twist into the three little piggies story-- I like how you made this story wiser with that 4th pig, quite genius of you! Thank you again for passing by my poem!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 12:44:00 PM
    Hooray! LOL... Very Great. My kind of poetry! You might like my 'Little Miss Poet and Spider".

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:37:00 PM
    this made me smile. :) I'm wondering who got the movie rights? warm thought, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 12:37:00 PM
    Oh my God! I sat with a smile the whole way thru this masterpiece.. :o) Fav,and a 10 from me....Man,I love all the wisdom you put into an old story like this..That is now a new story.. X-celent!