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John Posey

Date: 11/5/2012 4:57:00 AM

I'm new here and I see congratulations are in order. If it had anything to do with this poem, well, they got it right! I was caught up in this post from the start. At the conclusion, I had sand in my slippers. Great write.... I will read more later..... Jake

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2012 6:44:00 PM

This is totaly amazing I was transfixed the whole time I read it. A work of art Rebbeca.

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/23/2012 8:34:00 AM

congrats Rebecca,great write

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/17/2012 7:47:00 PM

Very cool...jimbo

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/17/2012 11:04:00 AM

Great imagery. ongratulations on your win.

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/8/2012 8:56:00 PM

Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/8/2012 2:18:00 PM

Water dreams can be very sensual! ;) Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2012 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "In Dreams" contest Rebecca. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/8/2012 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations Rebecca. Dreams can be so exciting and so confusing. You described it well. Love, Joyce

Suzette Crous

Date: 10/8/2012 10:03:00 AM

I love the climax of this tale. Congratulations on your win, Rebecca. Love, Suzette

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/8/2012 9:11:00 AM

Each verse builds your story, leading to the dream. Excellent - congratulations.

Adesitimi Taiwo Damilola

Date: 10/8/2012 6:17:00 AM

Wow! This is nice, it worths re-reading. I'm a new member here, please,i invite you to read my poems which I've just written.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 10/8/2012 6:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's dream contest.

ilene bauer

Date: 10/8/2012 5:22:00 AM

a well-told story and a well-deserved win. congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/8/2012 3:12:00 AM

This sounds as if it may have been a real dream. Very nicely written and deserving of winning. Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2012 9:06:00 PM

Rebecca, a wonderful win in Francine Roberts, "In dream" contest. Enjoyed all her winners, love PD

Becca Lucas Date: 10/8/2012 2:32:00 AM

Thank you PD :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/7/2012 5:24:00 PM

I once had a dream very similar to yours. That was after eating a couple of slices of pepperoni pizza just before going to bed. Congratulations on your win.

Becca Lucas Date: 10/8/2012 2:32:00 AM

Haha ;) Robert Pepperoni pizza before bed can be brutal :D Thanks for the congrats

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/7/2012 1:06:00 PM

awesome story line, congrats on your 3rd place win Rebecca

Becca Lucas Date: 10/7/2012 3:45:00 PM

Thank you, Francine! It was a good contest, I enjoyed writing this one, it was a lot of fun!

Maria Paz Samelo

Date: 10/7/2012 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations friend Rebecca for winning your poem..cheers!! (^_^)

Becca Lucas Date: 10/7/2012 3:45:00 PM

Thank you Maria!

david scott

Date: 10/3/2012 8:01:00 AM

hi rebecca you have soup from davidscott nice poem had to read again xx davidscott

jim joyce

Date: 9/30/2012 2:52:00 PM

what a great story /and poem ..had me on edge till the last .:)))

Richard Palmer

Date: 9/30/2012 6:47:00 AM

great write Rebecca,loved the journey,best wishes for the contest

Becca Lucas Date: 10/7/2012 3:51:00 PM

Thanks very much, Richard :)

Donald J Bennett

Date: 9/29/2012 10:50:00 PM

With this piece you have penned a jewel. It flows so very nicely as you lead us along a winding path and deliver us the vision you have wrought in words Good write.

Becca Lucas Date: 10/7/2012 3:49:00 PM

Thank you! That is very nice of you to say.

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/29/2012 3:02:00 PM

You paint a vivid picture with your very descriptive words! You had me right to the end... well written Rebecca! Hugs, Jack

Becca Lucas Date: 10/7/2012 3:50:00 PM

Thank you!

david scott

Date: 9/26/2012 11:53:00 AM

WICKED WRITE KLIKE THE PATTERN AND THE LINE HIGH ON LIFE LIKE YOUR STYLE LOST XX DAVIDSCOTT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2012 9:23:00 PM

Wow, this is FANTASTIC. I just love how you told this story, It was so real as if I was there. To put a damper on it , however, check the rules again. I am not 100 percent sure, but I think it is a maximum of 30 lines and I count 32 here. (If that is true, all you would have to do is reduce last four lines to a couplet).

Becca Lucas Date: 9/26/2012 5:08:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I know I went over. I've been trying to figure out what I want to cut. She did say if you go over you will not docked points, but if it rambles you definitely will... so I might leave it as is and hope for grace. :/ Thanks for the heads-up. hugs

jim joyce

Date: 9/24/2012 3:57:00 PM

wow .so real ...amazing story ..holds the tension all thru out the story ...

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