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Shadows-Collab

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Shadows-Collab

Our shadows were so restless As we passed from room to room They pretended to be living But each within their tomb Shrinking a little bit each day As the sun shown bright above With them a piece of our love slipped away Out on our quest for love The days of our younger shadows Dancing in each days light Love,and laughter floating on the breeze Until day turned into night Slowly burdened by lifes troubles Our shadows could dance no more Only to become darkend spots Fading away on the floor Now death's time,and space have taken you Leaving me only memories of your face The shadow that was once part of you Is now gone without a trace
9-24-12 By the sweet: Elizabeth Wesley&Dannyboy Kearley

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  1. Date: 11/25/2012 6:30:00 PM
    This is a very beautiful piece Dan, nice flow to it and message, blessings Carl, p.s. i wrote a poem called shadow dance with a different take on it.

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 8:49:00 PM
    the words flow beautifully together...well written you two! sad but wonderful piece!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:36:00 PM
    Just read this one! Awesome work you too! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 5:21:00 AM
    I absolutely love this Lizzie and Dan ;) awesome collab guys

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 2:12:00 AM
    Impressive verse here, Dan! You've certainly got a way with words - and your rhyme scheme gave it a perfect touch of mystery and beauty. Gotta say this is a favorite. :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 9:56:00 AM
    Wow!! A collaboration with Elizabeth must be a wonderful experience! Great write! Best of luck in the contest...(it's a winner!).

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 4:52:00 PM
    Fabulous!!! Terry

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:42:00 PM
    Hi Dan great collaboration here can see both hands at work, all the best my friend big O

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:16:00 PM
    A treasure of a verse...Absolutely beautiful! Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 8:05:00 PM
    Read it on Elizabeths page. An awsome collaboration Dan. You the man! :)

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:18:00 AM
    That's so wonderful! I really like it. It reminds me of Joshua. His shadow no longer here. Not in a sad way..because I know he is somewhere better.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 3:14:00 AM
    awesome...Bravo !!! to you both Eliz and Dan..brilliant writes ...luv it much oxoxox<3<3<3 SK

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 3:27:00 PM
    great images here Dan ;} I have written one's with shadows dancing. I seen you sent me a message or two ,, so you might like the new poem I posted last night ;} hey you have a blessed day Dan.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 11:25:00 AM
    wow! I love the picture you create with your words. Thanks for stopping by.. The love you love I am now just discovering lol cory

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:56:00 AM
    glad you drop by, read Elizabeth earlier, promise to come by and visit... i just love what you both have created here. awesome truly awesome....

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:50:00 AM
    Wow....you 2 did some exceptional writing here! The concept is original! It had me from beginning to end! This deserves a Hot Stamp!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:34:00 AM
    A fantastic duet. Would like to see these two poems together. Perhaps you guys could post them in a blog together.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:36:00 PM
    strong images, personification and metaphor and touches of poignancy laced throughout, dan and lizzie... remarkable collab!..:)

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 12:03:00 PM
    Oh, how I love it when you two tango!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 10:41:00 AM
    Thank you for reading and commenting on my poems. I'm a newbie. I draw,paint and sculpt but my life is hectic right now so I found a new outlet. Mine aren't exactly sophisticated, far from Edgar Alan Poe but they come into my head every now and then. I love this one and I intend to read all of your work. Oh, thanks for the title suggestion. I might use it and no Open For Suggestions is not the title. Ha ha! :)

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