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- Sun Umbrella -



                                       Sitting under my sun umbrella
                                    The ocean is my wonderful painting
                                     The sun shines on the small waves
                              Far in the distance I can glimpse a small boat


                                       I must have my sunglasses on
                       The sun heats I have shadow under my sun umbrella
                                    The sand on the beach is burning hot
                     The waves along the beach creates scratches in the sand








Turkey 23. 09. 2012
A-L  Andresen :)

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    Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
    Date: 10/28/2012 4:31:00 PM
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    You painted a picture on the beach with this poem, nicely done:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/28/2012 4:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gwen, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Ty Price
    Date: 10/26/2012 4:37:00 PM
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    very nice imagery. great write.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ty, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/15/2012 8:23:00 PM
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    the ocean is great inspiration, you painted the scene beautifully.. Good poem :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/16/2012 2:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sandra, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 10/7/2012 4:00:00 AM
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    I sure would love to have that sun umbrella as well, Anne-Lise :)-- I really enjoyed this very relaxing and sunny write of yours! Just me saying hi and enjoy your week :) Hugs to you!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/7/2012 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nikko, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    bl devnath
    Date: 9/30/2012 1:14:00 AM
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    Enjoy my friend in the days of vacation. We are all with you. Thanks for remembering us. Thanks too for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/30/2012 2:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bl. thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 9/28/2012 8:10:00 PM
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    Wow!! A beautiful Turkey and an awesome poem written showing a vivid picture of this wonderful place!!! Thank you so much for I've enjoyed reading your new poems this morning my dear friend, Anne-Lise! Have a nice day and take care always!!! Love, leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/29/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Phyllis Babcock
    Date: 9/28/2012 1:28:00 PM
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    Ah I see you were in Turkey on your holiday when you wrote this. Sounds lovely to be sitting in the sun. The weather has been lovely and next week we start dipping into 10C or 50F . Sounds like winter is on it's way. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/28/2012 2:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No summer heat more .... autumn and winter standing in front of our door. - Thank you Phyllis for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Anthony Nutter
    Date: 9/26/2012 11:35:00 AM
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    Absolutely loved the deriptive last line. Enjoyed

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anthony, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Gail DeBole
    Date: 9/26/2012 9:41:00 AM
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    Hi Anne Lise - Your warm title drew me in instantly to your lovely poem. Have a wonderful vacation. Thank you for commenting on my poem. - Much love to you, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gail, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 9/26/2012 9:27:00 AM
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    Your poem makes me want to go see Turkey even more. Great job.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joann, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Cecilia Macfarlane
    Date: 9/26/2012 7:56:00 AM
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    Sounds like the perfect vacation, and that you are enjoying every minute of it. Lovely write! Hugs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes I do Cecilia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:57:00 AM
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    Anne Lise; You must be having a wonderful time. I can just picture it in my mind. Enjoy it and have some fun. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 7:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lucilla, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    harry horsman
    Date: 9/26/2012 6:16:00 AM
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    sitting here in rain soaked yorshire, this poem is a wonderful gem, thank you

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Doreen Wright
    Date: 9/25/2012 10:27:00 PM
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    The first line hooked me! What a beautiful poem filled with imagery. Great poem.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 3:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Doreen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 9/25/2012 8:18:00 PM
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    Anne Lise...good to be reading you again this wednesday morning...how are you dear poetess...enjoy your week and take good care of yourself.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 3:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yasmin, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 9/25/2012 7:36:00 PM
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    Nice view from your oceanic painting! I like how you described the ocean scratching the sand...Turkey must be grand! :) gwendolen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/26/2012 3:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gwen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 9/25/2012 3:00:00 PM
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    no need now for the umbrella if the weather back home is windy??... huggs to you, anne!..:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2012 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ----- OXOX Anne-Lise - - - - -
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 9/25/2012 11:30:00 AM
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    sunbrella......sounds so toasty pleasant.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2012 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Doris, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 9/25/2012 4:47:00 AM
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    Beautiful imagery here. Turkey is famous for its sea, sun and sand.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yesha, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    jack horne
    Date: 9/24/2012 2:31:00 PM
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    I can see why Turkey is so popular, my friend - sounds like paradise. Lovely write

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2012 3:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jack, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    kash poet
    Date: 9/24/2012 12:18:00 PM
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    A beautiful picture of beach you have penned here Anne!Love this:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2012 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kash, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 9/24/2012 11:50:00 AM
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    Reads like a great place to be and enjoy..Thanks for stopping by..If this is for a contest, winner for sure..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2012 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No contest Sara - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 9/24/2012 11:20:00 AM
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    nothing like sauntering on the beach, anne.. is your umbrella back home or still jetting around?.. fine day to you with huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2012 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Back in Norway, we have no need of sun umbrella Nette. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Date: 9/24/2012 8:55:00 AM
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    a soothing image to be on the beach with a sun umbrella letting the breeze pass by looking at the waves.... makes me wanna go to the beach lol, enjoyed your write on the Sun Umbrella Anne,...p.d.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2012 11:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Linda, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Cindy Cayton
    Date: 9/24/2012 8:26:00 AM
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    Pretty poem as always, love your style of writingdear poetess, and in re: to your remark taken good within my heart. I have ALWAYS loved without it in return, yet this man is thee last one for me.. just cannot do it any longer. out of gas, life and love? smile is sad but true, life is suffering, I will get my reward in heaven, Love, Cindy Lu

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2012 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cindy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 9/24/2012 6:15:00 AM
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    Beautiful, Anne-Lise. I can visualize the images. Always love the ocean. So awesome. Enjoy your vacation :) Love ya, Toquyen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2012 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love and sunshine Anne-Lise :)
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 9/24/2012 3:13:00 AM
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    Anne, i wish to visit the beach too but the beaches here are so crowded..but you have painted a fantastic picture with this poem and the title rocks...have a good week Anne dear friend...love and huggs sent your way..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2012 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yasmin, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Dan Kearley
    Date: 9/24/2012 12:43:00 AM
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    Ahhh...Thanks for bringing us all along with you to the beach.... Ouch! The sand is HOT! :o) f.e.f oxox

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2012 12:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dan, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - f.e.f. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 9/23/2012 2:34:00 PM
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    amazing visuals with phrases that soothe my rainy days, anne... i can imagine you sitting and enjoying this scenery... have a fun day!... :) huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/23/2012 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nette, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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    Joseph May
    Date: 9/23/2012 2:21:00 PM
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    such a blissful image...enjoy...hugs...Joseph

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/23/2012 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joseph, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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