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What No Teeth Grandma

the dried apple-headed
grandma poppet smells
cinnamony*   
appearing toothless               

grinning                               
dressed                               
in calico*  


Contest:SEPTOLET THE PUPPET 
Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Date:9/22/12

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  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:46:00 AM

    Debbie, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:04:00 AM

    Big conratulations Debbie xx

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Wow! loved it Debbie, congrats!!

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:53:00 AM

    Loved this entry Deb. Congrats on your wonderful win. Awesome imagery!

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 5:19:00 PM

    Well done Debbie. Fun to read. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 4:55:00 PM

    Glad to see this one high on the list, Debs. I remember liking it. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 1:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Debi!!Very nice approach by you.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:59:00 PM

    CONGRATS DEBBIE ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV .. CUTSY TITLE ..AM ENJOYING MY NEW BABY BUNDLE BOR 9/22 .. MY YOUNGEST SON eRIC HAD HIS FIRST CHILD .. WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A GIRL BUT OH WHAT A NICE SURPRISE TO FIND IT WAS A DARLING BOY ..

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/27/2012 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow so lucky to have grandchildren!
  1. Date: 9/26/2012 4:15:00 PM

    Who else would think of this but Debbie--creative magic!!!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:58:00 PM

    Reminds me when I was in my crafty period....I tried making those apple-head dolls.....they kind of creeped me out LOL!! Great idea for your poem!! Congrats on your win, dear Deb!!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 2:29:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Debbie. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 9:39:00 AM

    Autumn's winds welcome winters freeze. When Grandma's head falls from the trees. Ashes to ashes, dried apple's and all. Roten to the core at the end of fall.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 9:15:00 AM

    Excellent septolet, Debbie! I remember those funny dolls. Best wishes in Nettle's contest (you don't need luck!) Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 5:30:00 AM

    humor work well in poetry.

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 7:05:00 PM

    great write Debbie,best of luck

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 6:19:00 PM

    I made one of these dolls once, years ago. Nice septolet.

    Grisetti Avatar Joann Grisetti Date: 9/26/2012 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congratulations on your win.
  1. Date: 9/22/2012 2:02:00 PM

    I knew somebody like that... my dearly departed mother-in-law! LOL Lots of luck Debbie... love and hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 1:53:00 PM

    yeah way to go my dear super gal friend Alizaabet...thank you for your compliment..if anyone had a teacher like you , they would be writing verses well as I did in that constanza that you liked. I really have to thank you dear Bet..you gave me the couragea and the inspiration..its all in your name that I get this fame...atleast I think so..

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/22/2012 2:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's all how hard YOU work and what a rich imagination YOU have!
  1. Date: 9/22/2012 1:25:00 PM

    this is awesome. It reminds me of these old dolls I used to see a long time ago with very funny grandma/grandpa faces.