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Blast Away

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Blast Away

Belittled every day
By the one who says she loves
Everything about my life
Constantly brought down

Several offer hands to save
Me from falling down, but I
Don't need to take hold, I can
Make it on my own and I

Wanna blast away
I wanna blast away

Haunted by the past
Emotions manifest
I'm in love with someone else
But I don't know I really am

Or is it something else? Maybe
It's not quite how it seems, maybe
In love with the idea, not quite
The idea manifested, but still I

Wanna blast away
I wanna blast away

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  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:51:00 PM
    Thumbs up for the love Derek. Very good poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)