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Moon lit Sky of Stars

A moon lit sky of stars
Spanning far and wide
Preserved on the shelf in jars
A moon lit sky of stars
Sleeping amongst the sand bars
Listing to the rolling tide
A moon lit sky of stars
Spanning far and wide

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  1. Date: 5/7/2013 11:52:00 PM

    So this was your first one? Good easy to read and understand writing. Reminds me of a night at the Jersey Shore.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:12:00 AM

    I like your idea of moon light sky of stars listening to rolling tide

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:14:00 PM

    About your poem: i love the open attention in the sky. A very dreamy image..xox...PD,

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 9:12:00 PM

    Hello Matthew, thank you for the nice comments. stopping by to read the first poem you posted on the soup. :-) A late warm welcome to the soup.... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 4:56:00 PM

    Sets a lovely backdrop... Listing to the rolling tide..nice line...I think that sometimes short is best, and you do it very well here.....

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 3:03:00 AM

    ..short but went well..continue doing good literary pieces..

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 11:35:00 AM

    well done. Excellent lines for your triolet