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My Ideal

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My Ideal

She's the one that's my ideal,
 but forever she would steal
        my heart away...
      and she would say...

Oh my dear I'll be the one,
as she goes about her fun
   then she would stray...
           all in a day!

 All the time in my romance,
she would never take a chance
         just for a while...
         but in her smile...

She'd pretend she didn't care,
with her charm and golden hair
          all in her eyes...
          to my surprise!

  I would always be the one
   just to see her on the run,
        she wasn't there...
         for me to care...

She's a cotton-tale you see,
in the chase she would run free
        from my romance...
      there'd be no chance...

For a treasure to receive,
all the while I'd still believe
     that she's the one...
      to come undone...

She's the one that's my ideal,
 but forever she would steal
         my heart away...
       and she would say...
             Goodbuy!


September 21, 2012

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  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:45:00 AM
    Bravo on an excellent winning love at risk poem, you keep a nice light tone. :) Sheri

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 5:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Get it together" contest Robert. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:51:00 PM
    Wonderful write Robert! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:50:00 PM
    Wonderful write Robert! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:33:00 AM
    Robert, congratulations with your wonderful and well deserved win after expression your thoughts for the ~~India Arie - "Get it together" ~ Contest... It was nice hosting this contest for "Hughes, William" from the soup. Take care~ XOX ~PD