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The Rose that Bloomed

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The Rose that Bloomed

One glowing dawn he came ,

With a rose in his hand.

Rain drops were still there,

Though not over him.

“God! He was melting away!

Why are all those clouds about, Mark?

Don’t you know I have always waited for you…

I  waited for you long and long.”

“Dude! My voice left me alone!

Well…my eyes had voice!

It was all transparent with my eyes.”

At last he gazed at me and went away.

Oh! He left me without the rose.

“Well…you  know…

Another day will come.

He will step in.

A new rose will bloom for me.”

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  1. Date: 9/22/2012 2:57:00 AM

    Lovely write Umme! Nicely narrated!

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 10:21:00 AM

    Real prose poetry, working with hope expecting mark to come in one day, optimistic view the best in life.... Well done

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 10:18:00 AM

    I agree with Kenisha just below.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 8:06:00 AM

    nice write