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NOCTURNAL DYSPNEA

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NOCTURNAL DYSPNEA

My trauma wears the black cloak of night I breathe rapid, heaving sighs of fright Wind is sucked out, my sails gasp in hollow air Bronchi in knots, constriction so tight! Descending darkness with its chill and freeze Lungs pumping storms with a whistling wheeze The drying out reservoir of sustaining oxygen As I struggle to inhale fresh breeze. Spasms haunt my black nights with an alarming persistence Threatening to cut short the chord of existence Draining vigor and vitality, gripping wind pipe in a choke hold Viperous asthma spews venom with vengeance! Panting, doubling over, chest congested with rattling cough Breathless but determined I grope about in darkness, battling Just one puff away from agony, I desperately rummage Magic potion inhaler among medication, mottling! The devil disappears at the first touch of sun ray A little shaky still, yet I waltz through my day Each unobstructed breathe seems like a gift from Heaven Before night fall I shall rid the ghost off my way! 21/09/2012

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:41:00 PM

    Oh my..this is almost where I am NOW cough cough cough! and you made it poetry HUZZAH! Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 10:34:00 AM

    I see congrats below me... So congrats, I can most definitely see why this would be a winning piece!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 6:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 9:52:00 AM

    Wonderful and scary write with the form Yesha! Congrats

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:39:00 AM

    Hey, I see you won with your splendid poem here!! Big congrats, Yesha.

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 6:12:00 AM

    Big congratulations Yesha, my sister is a very bad asthmatic I can truly sympathise xx

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:11:00 PM

    YESHA :-) A wonderful congratulations in Craig's "Night-Dark-Black-Happy-Sad" contest. Nice reading and supporting all his winners. have a nice and wonderful day, *PD

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 9:41:00 AM

    strong and emotionally charged work, yesh... my best congrats on your splendid win!..) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 8:20:00 AM

    congrats on ur win...loved reading it..xx

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 7:47:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 4:45:00 AM

    wonderful write Yesha...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win friend Yesha…cheers and hugs!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:37:00 PM

    wow!! congratulations :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:59:00 PM

    Sounds like you're a nurse too. Well done, very descriptive, congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:46:00 PM

    Great poem... a malady so well described... Congratulations on your win!! Terry

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:31:00 PM

    Asthma has comeback to haunt my life again. Your poem is timely. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:24:00 PM

    Subtle alliteration of V's ....great lines of poetic reactive airway disease! This is so nice...glad I didn't hear a nebulizer machine in here too...great descriptions of relief at the end...wonderful write, YESHA! Saving for my fav's! gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 1:54:00 PM

    I get asthma too - perfectly described, my friend

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 3:44:00 AM

    A great write Yesha, on the agony of asthma. I know about that, because my oldest sister suffers from it, my oldest brother died from it and my daughter had it when she was a baby. Thanks for visiting. Best wishes and one love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 9:40:00 PM

    wow, you really have described your plight. My husband has had asthma really bad at times and suffered like this. Ending up in ER for it twice too. I hope you are pretty well most of the time?? A very interesting rubaiyat poem, Yesha.

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 4:55:00 PM

    I hope this is just a metaphoric one and not your actual life..Asthma is a very frightening illness..Thanks for stopping by my work and taking time to comment..Sara

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 1:14:00 PM

    if you're talking of asthma and the panic that goes with it, i'm on the same page, yesh... i enjoy the way this moves and where it takes the reader... well penned!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 5:23:00 AM

    You describe struggling to breathe with profound knowing. It is a frightful trama to live with and I think writing about it is very cathartic. Blessings to you my friend. I am on my way to bed. Your morning is my late night. Our humid air is at 100 percent and raining, no sun tomorrow either, but I love the rain, just not the humidity. Have a great peaceful night tonight.