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The Hit

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The Hit

Hot glass on cool lips 
then a smile
half a dozen long trips
count the miles.

Exhale the smoke with a YES!
someone might be watching,
but I'm not pressed.
I listen for the sizzle,
that's the test.

Just a little piece of the rock,
that's all I'll need for a minute.
You think you've got it controlled,
you don't realize until you are in it.

The days will run into nights.
The nights will run into days.
Just when you think you are finished,
you run out again in a haze.

I don't mean to be cruel or unkind,
but it's a game of roulette, so just spin it.
Don't say when you play a game of this kind,
you didn't know the rules till you're finished.

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  1. Date: 9/21/2012 2:34:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Richard. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol