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Would It Make You Change

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Would It Make You Change

Can you imagine if
The later part of your life you didn't get along
With family members ?
Time passes and you grow old
You transpire and become a big tree truck
Intertwined with several other tree trucks 
Then you come to realize the family members
That you didn't get along with is a part 
Of the intertwined branches. 
If you had a chance would you change your mind in this life
To try and figure out a way to get along 
With those family members?

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  1. Date: 9/21/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us Patricia. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol