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Inside A Rainbow

I have a friend who slid down a rainbow...
I'm a little different and found another flow...
I crawl inside and touch the colors that are bright...
When heads are turned I take a taste with delight...
Each color has its own flavor but all very sweet...
I run my tongue along the walls from head to feet...
And as my friend slides down the rainbow, I ride inside...
But in the end we both find gold however we ride...


inspired by Arild's "Sliding Down The Rainbow"
but went my own way...

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  1. Date: 11/12/2012 1:51:00 PM

    Sheesh, what a thought provoking piece! You really show great talent in your writings! I'm glad you enjoyed my Risque Ballroom Dance ;)

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 6:17:00 AM

    A lollipop rainbow....that's what this reminds me of...belated congrats, matey! :)

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 2:11:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 3:25:00 AM

    Lovely! Many congratulations on an awesome win with this wonderful poem!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:33:00 PM

    This truly is one of the best in the rainbow contest. BIG congrats on your win. A unique and creative write.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 5:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Rainbow Fun~" contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:43:00 AM

    Hello Michael really good comment you left me and I'd like to say I was entranced by this winner.." I've never tasted rainbow before..!

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 2:38:00 PM

    congrads on a wonderful first place win Mikessssss!feels great sharing the same space with you..

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 2:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on your stunning poem and win in the contest.

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:04:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Michael.

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 10:27:00 AM

    A super congrats on your placement in this very colorful contest,Michael.Seems we launched an inspirational avalanche with these rainbows,lol:) Have a great Saturday brother,see you around the soup bowl!

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 7:26:00 AM

    Michael, how lovely! Congratulations on your first place win! A beautiful verse! Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 6:21:00 AM

    CONGRATS MICHAEL LUV ON A SUPER FIRST PLACE WIN FOR RAINBOW ELEGANCE WRITE .. JG SO HONORED TO SHARE WITH U ON THIS WIN LUV .. NOW ,, ALTOGETHER .. GO GIANTS .. BEAT EAGLES TO A PULP ON SUNDAY NITE FOOTBALL .. OF ALL GAMES .. I NEED OUR GMEN TO WIN OVER SLOOPY BIRDS AS I HAVE SOME EAGLE FANS LURKING IN MY HOUSEHOLD .. OH .. XOXO

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 5:40:00 AM

    congrats on ur win...:))

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 3:22:00 AM

    Well done Michael a terrrific win xx

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 2:21:00 AM

    Many congrats Michael for this wonderful win.

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:35:00 AM

    nice lines! congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:07:00 AM

    Michael, I'm having tons of ;-) rainbow fun reading and congratulating all my colorful "Rainbow Fun" winners. A sweet congratulations, goodnight~ xox~ PD

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 9:51:00 AM

    Full of wonderful colors from all over the world. - Have a wonderful weekend Michael. - xoxo love / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 4:56:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with us Michael. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 4:54:00 AM

    I read this one early this morning while still in bed and I wrote mine after reading yours MJF, thank you for the smiles you always bring forth :) love & hugs CTH xoxo

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 2:16:00 AM

    Thanks for the inspiration on my latest write :) love & hugs CTH

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 10:06:00 PM

    Michael, I enjoyed everything about your poem... I wish the soup would feature rainbow poems one week or so... wouldn't that be xool... and by the way, I love what you did here...LOL.. you are so clever. and sneaky, I'm glad the inspiration in Arlids poem moved you to go deeper with your rainbow ride.. xox~ pd

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 9:19:00 PM

    Oh this is a beauty, Michael! I love it and now must go find the poem that inspired you! Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 8:54:00 PM

    stunning ride Michael luv .. I just read Arild's poem and clicked to read yours as the inspiration is like a magnetic force .. well the GMEN r looking terrific .. hope they hold till 4th quarter ends .. even ith all those injuries ..WE R THE CHAMPIONS MY FRIEND JG in cheering mode ..xoxo

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 4:49:00 PM

    This is a very clever write my friend! I like your angle you took with this rainbow, going inside and getting yourself a taste of the rainbow...I sure would like to try that, got any room for me in that ride in a rainbow? What a glorious and stupendous poem Michael! I really enjoyed this tender and delightful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 4:32:00 PM

    very nice imagery.... cory

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 4:16:00 PM

    Haa!Good stuff here brother:-) We`re the odd couple,throw us in any direction.We would find a pot of gold no matter what!Lol,words say that there`s a lil gold nugget down in Texas..or overseas in Cape Town too!Awesome poem Mike:)