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Last night's dream

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Last night's dream

Wandering in a desolate desert
The sun above shining so bright
Searching for water in the mirages
To soothe my parched tongue
Walking on the hot sweltering sand
I am ,with my blistered feet 
My skin drenched in my own sweat
My cheeks wet with painful tears
My body lost its last drop of water
Fell unconscious under the merciless sun
To my surprise ,I woke up on a flowery bed
Scented with exotic orchids
My ears hearing the music of a rustling brook
Opening my eyes to a different scenery
My heart got filled with ecstasy
Soothing morning Sun I could see
In a beautiful pink sky
Trees filled with blossoms all around
The water of the brook so clear,
Shimmering in the morning light
I walked up to the brook 
Placed my wounded feet in it
Magically they were healed
Healed also was my restless soul
I felt at last ,I reached my destiny
Then suddenly bells started ringing
A shrieking ringing bell I heard
Startling me out of my bed
It was my Alarm clock 
Wiping sweat from my brow
I remembered last night’s dream
I had experienced heaven and hell
In just one night, for sure

9/20/2012

written for the contest 'in dreams'

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  1. Date: 9/20/2012 10:53:00 PM
    You have described extreme differences of circumstances very well in this writing.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/2/2012 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks....:)))
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 9:31:00 PM
    Wow, what a range of emotion from pain and suffering to joy and healing! I enjoyed the journey...hugs, Rhonda

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/2/2012 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks ...:))
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 2:30:00 PM
    this is a wonderful poem, with such profound feelings, good luck in the contest, i'm sure will go well......

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/2/2012 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks...:))
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 3:27:00 AM
    Wonderful poem for the dream contest.A captivating write.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/2/2012 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks..:)) .