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Since you went away

Blow after blow upon the throbbing heart and my torn in half soul since you went away. Wish you could have stayed a little longer if only a crane could take me away from here help me catch up with you. I'm alive beside you you are the compass that guided me through many a difficult impasse don't know if I can brave these rough seas that have hit my shores since you went away. I know you will be with me but I miss your funny ways that have helped me through many a storm along the way. Blow after blow upon my throbbing heart and my torn in half soul since you went away. By CarolineCecile - 09.15.12

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  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:36:00 AM

    You just summarized my September. May October shine...beautiful & touching lines.

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 3:18:00 AM

    a gripping write so wonderfully expressed... enjoyed your repetitive stanzas... :) hugggs

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 12:46:00 AM

    :)Good one