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i take the blame


All by myself, alone, I softly chant your name,
Own up for our defunct weeping bond and I take the blame.
It was our love very pure and not lusty lure,
Unsure, kaput and insecure I thirstily quest for love’s cure……

Cannot truly imagine that I let you go, I own up and take the blame,
But for us to be happy I did so, To silently blow off our love’s flame…..
My heart I am sure you did not know,
Was tattered and torn from the time I let you go,

I wish our bonds could have fondly stayed on,
Woven intertwined with emotions, enameled with love’s lacquerers firmly bound.
But I still take the blame,
Too late for me as this body I had lit and set aflame.
Till our laden guilt we overcame….

From above as my body burned,
Saw your woeful self  as you wailed in lament and yearned

I take the blame.It is now too late, I take the blame

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  1. Date: 10/11/2012 10:13:00 PM

    Congratulations Sashi, I loved your poem. -Seren

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/12/2012 10:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much for your wishes Seren..~sashi
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:41:00 PM

    SASHI, , congratulations, with your awesome poem in MICHAEL'S contest..... xox~pd

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/10/2012 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanx a million for the wishes PD...~ sashi
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:12:00 PM

    A touching heartfelt write! Congrats on your awesome win! Hugs

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Cecilia......~sashi
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 12:41:00 PM

    A very interesting write. Congratulations on the win.

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    than x Carol...~sashi
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:45:00 AM

    Congratulations on your first win, Sashi. This is really awesome! :) hugs, Leonora

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Lenora .....~sashi
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 5:06:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Sashi. Love, Carol

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Carol...~sashi
  1. Date: 10/9/2012 1:30:00 AM

    I have not heard the word "kaput" in years! Nice touch and I love your poem.. Congratulations on your win Sashi. Su

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanx Suzette...........~sashi
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:57:00 PM

    Congrats on your first place win. beautiful poem. Lee

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Lee,...........~sashi
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:57:00 PM

    beautifully written poem my friend Sashi..congrats on your Big win!! (^_^)

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    than you very much Maria....~sashi
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 7:20:00 PM

    a deeply moving poem, sad, touching. Congratulations on your win.

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Debbie...~sashi
    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you JOann.....~sashi
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:29:00 PM

    Such risks we take without safety nets! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 4:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your wonderful first place win with this moving entry Sashi.

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Connie......~sashi
  1. Date: 10/8/2012 4:19:00 PM

    Congrats on 1st place in my Blame contest... moving on all level my friend... Michael

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 10/9/2012 8:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Michael.... nearly every word is true except the a lillitle bit towards the end ..........very emotional project for me....~sashi
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 7:48:00 AM

    sad write. if you shorten it to 15 lines, you could enter it in michael's contest...just a thought :)

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 9/20/2012 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks ... ill do that...~sashi
  1. Date: 9/20/2012 12:53:00 AM

    Sad write.It makes us feel never to let go hope.

    prabhu Avatar sashi prabhu Date: 9/20/2012 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanx ...........~sashi