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Carol Sunshine Brown
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Spiteful Oaf
Sunshine her nickname
Lived in happiness for years...
Words stole her passion
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/11/2013 9:23:00 PM
well done here.. hope no one steals your passion... you are the sunny side of the soup.....xox~LINDA
Erich Goller
Date: 10/24/2012 12:50:00 PM
that's a lovely expressed Senrtu, Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Sam Love
Date: 10/5/2012 5:58:00 AM
You are kidding us. I can tell from your work the passion is still there.
daver austin
Date: 10/2/2012 10:35:00 AM
Kind of a rotten eclipse, eh. Love it. daver
Karen Deeks
Date: 10/1/2012 1:56:00 PM
a wonderful piece which touches deep with thoughts and visions... tyvm and thanks for the review....karen
Bradley Cox
Date: 10/1/2012 1:34:00 PM
Good Luck in the contest, great poem, thank you!
Maria Paz Samelo
Date: 10/1/2012 12:20:00 PM
awesome poem friend Carol...Good luck in Susan's Contest :) thanks for dropping by :) Have a blessed day!!hugs!!
Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 10/1/2012 11:33:00 AM
Hi Carol, Interesting the way the title, images, and time passing play against each other in this poem. Very nice. :) Sheri
Leonora Galinta
Date: 10/1/2012 9:35:00 AM
I'm reading this again for the second time because I really love your name as it was described in your very delightful senryu. Thanks my dear friend!! hugs/always:) Leonora
SCRIBE ML
Date: 10/1/2012 9:20:00 AM
And has been to put good use, POETRY!....Does it fit?...I like these words, thanks for the Congrats!
Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/1/2012 2:22:00 AM
Counting the syllables...Oll Korrect! WOW! :)
Vesna Kovrlija
Date: 9/27/2012 12:10:00 AM
Lovely poem!
Robert Pettit
Date: 9/26/2012 10:45:00 PM
This is a short and sweet write.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/26/2012 9:46:00 PM
Just reading this one again. I really like it!
david scott
Date: 9/26/2012 11:47:00 AM
Lovely write In like all your writes thankyouy for your comments on mine hoope you are well xx davidscott
Joann Grisetti
Date: 9/26/2012 9:03:00 AM
A great senryu, humor and a twist.
Becca Lucas
Date: 9/26/2012 7:22:00 AM
Really nice!
harry horsman
Date: 9/25/2012 3:51:00 PM
wow, powerful one is this, excellent Carol, good luck...
Doris Culverhouse
Date: 9/25/2012 6:42:00 AM
my hubby calls me sunshine....he was 29 when we met and a late bloomer.
Yesha Shah
Date: 9/25/2012 4:21:00 AM
Just stopping by with good wishes Carol...
jessica warren
Date: 9/23/2012 11:08:00 PM
That's gonna b a winner good luck..its so simple and delicate but is speaking so loudly. Lovely read.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 9/23/2012 9:34:00 AM
Sunshine suits u Carol luv ..u bring happiness everywhere u go .. your words grow our passion for poetry .. winning wishes in Susan's contest .. blessings this chilly Sunday ..
bl devnath
Date: 9/23/2012 5:59:00 AM
With few words, expression of passion of happiness for infinity years of the Sun with it's own nickname carrying nicely. Lovely adorned the hidden image. Thanks for your comments on my write. Best of luck for the contest. Loved always, bl
kash poet
Date: 9/23/2012 5:04:00 AM
I have sent you a soupmail.
kash poet
Date: 9/23/2012 2:30:00 AM
Great Seryu here Carol!Best wishes for the contest.
apoorva patrikar
Date: 9/22/2012 10:01:00 PM
whoa! best luck
Richard Palmer
Date: 9/22/2012 6:16:00 PM
ink tells her tales,good luck Carol
Joann Grisetti
Date: 9/22/2012 5:53:00 PM
I love this senryu.I wish you the best in the contest.
Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 9/22/2012 2:02:00 PM
This is a great write. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
jack horne
Date: 9/22/2012 1:52:00 PM
yes, words can be so powerful in good or bad ways, my friend. Lovely senryu. Hope you have a great weekend xx
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