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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:23:00 PM
    well done here.. hope no one steals your passion... you are the sunny side of the soup.....xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:50:00 PM
    that's a lovely expressed Senrtu, Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:58:00 AM
    You are kidding us. I can tell from your work the passion is still there.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:35:00 AM
    Kind of a rotten eclipse, eh. Love it. daver

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:56:00 PM
    a wonderful piece which touches deep with thoughts and visions... tyvm and thanks for the review....karen

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:34:00 PM
    Good Luck in the contest, great poem, thank you!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:20:00 PM
    awesome poem friend Carol...Good luck in Susan's Contest :) thanks for dropping by :) Have a blessed day!!hugs!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Hi Carol, Interesting the way the title, images, and time passing play against each other in this poem. Very nice. :) Sheri

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:35:00 AM
    I'm reading this again for the second time because I really love your name as it was described in your very delightful senryu. Thanks my dear friend!! hugs/always:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:22:00 AM
    Counting the syllables...Oll Korrect! WOW! :)

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 12:10:00 AM
    Lovely poem!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:45:00 PM
    This is a short and sweet write.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:46:00 PM
    Just reading this one again. I really like it!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 11:47:00 AM
    Lovely write In like all your writes thankyouy for your comments on mine hoope you are well xx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:03:00 AM
    A great senryu, humor and a twist.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:51:00 PM
    wow, powerful one is this, excellent Carol, good luck...

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:42:00 AM
    my hubby calls me sunshine....he was 29 when we met and a late bloomer.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 4:21:00 AM
    Just stopping by with good wishes Carol...

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 11:08:00 PM
    That's gonna b a winner good luck..its so simple and delicate but is speaking so loudly. Lovely read.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 9:34:00 AM
    Sunshine suits u Carol luv ..u bring happiness everywhere u go .. your words grow our passion for poetry .. winning wishes in Susan's contest .. blessings this chilly Sunday ..