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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:23:00 PM

    well done here.. hope no one steals your passion... you are the sunny side of the soup.....xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:50:00 PM

    that's a lovely expressed Senrtu, Thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:58:00 AM

    You are kidding us. I can tell from your work the passion is still there.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 10:35:00 AM

    Kind of a rotten eclipse, eh. Love it. daver

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:56:00 PM

    a wonderful piece which touches deep with thoughts and visions... tyvm and thanks for the review....karen

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Good Luck in the contest, great poem, thank you!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 12:20:00 PM

    awesome poem friend Carol...Good luck in Susan's Contest :) thanks for dropping by :) Have a blessed day!!hugs!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 11:33:00 AM

    Hi Carol, Interesting the way the title, images, and time passing play against each other in this poem. Very nice. :) Sheri

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:35:00 AM

    I'm reading this again for the second time because I really love your name as it was described in your very delightful senryu. Thanks my dear friend!! hugs/always:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:20:00 AM

    And has been to put good use, POETRY!....Does it fit?...I like these words, thanks for the Congrats!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:22:00 AM

    Counting the syllables...Oll Korrect! WOW! :)

  1. Date: 9/27/2012 12:10:00 AM

    Lovely poem!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:45:00 PM

    This is a short and sweet write.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:46:00 PM

    Just reading this one again. I really like it!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Lovely write In like all your writes thankyouy for your comments on mine hoope you are well xx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:03:00 AM

    A great senryu, humor and a twist.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:51:00 PM

    wow, powerful one is this, excellent Carol, good luck...

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:42:00 AM

    my hubby calls me sunshine....he was 29 when we met and a late bloomer.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 4:21:00 AM

    Just stopping by with good wishes Carol...

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 11:08:00 PM

    That's gonna b a winner good luck..its so simple and delicate but is speaking so loudly. Lovely read.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 9:34:00 AM

    Sunshine suits u Carol luv ..u bring happiness everywhere u go .. your words grow our passion for poetry .. winning wishes in Susan's contest .. blessings this chilly Sunday ..

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 5:59:00 AM

    With few words, expression of passion of happiness for infinity years of the Sun with it's own nickname carrying nicely. Lovely adorned the hidden image. Thanks for your comments on my write. Best of luck for the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 5:04:00 AM

    I have sent you a soupmail.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 2:30:00 AM

    Great Seryu here Carol!Best wishes for the contest.

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 10:01:00 PM

    whoa! best luck

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 6:16:00 PM

    ink tells her tales,good luck Carol

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 5:53:00 PM

    I love this senryu.I wish you the best in the contest.

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 2:02:00 PM

    This is a great write. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 1:52:00 PM

    yes, words can be so powerful in good or bad ways, my friend. Lovely senryu. Hope you have a great weekend xx

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 6:44:00 AM

    An awesome write Carol. A winner in the contest. -Mohammad